Love Diamonds

My love

I saw you standing there

Your eyes locked with mine

I knew right then

That we were one

And during that night

In the dim twilight

You drew me close to you

And I already knew

My heart belonged to you

Every day that passed me by

I waited patiently for you

To come to me

So we can be free together

I waited for you to take me away

From all things that seemed

So dreary and dark

Some nights seemed endless

As I waited

You finally came and

Swept me away

And we danced in the dark

Like two lovers unrestrained

Diamonds sparkling at midnight

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sonison 4 years ago from Heaven 7

NO wonder why diamonds are the ladies best friend. Sparklingly brilliant hub.

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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

beautiful thoughts Caroline.

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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

"Diamonds sparkling at midnight." What a beautiful metaphor for lovers. Up and all but funny!

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Robwrite 4 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

Hi Caroline; Great imagery. Nicely done,


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home


ya ya ya typical girl... its all about the diamond-*smirk* to look for the most spectacular sparkles look no further than your own eyes.. oh I used to be smooth..*lol*


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

You set just the right mood.

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Sonison thank you for your lovely comment. :)

@ Curiad thank you very much! :)

@ XStatic thank you for your kind words. :)

@ Robwrite thank you very much. :)

@ Tom LOL u are still smooth. :)

@ Michael thank you! :)

@ Mckbirdbks thank you so much! :)

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Now that was really beautiful. Your words shine like sparkling diamonds. Passing this on.

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myownlife 4 years ago from london

fantastic imagination, brilliant work.


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

You're back, Caroline, with more beautiful poetry. This one is special, as it sounds like a "best" love.

Tom Hellert 4 years ago

smooth like sandpaper thats me

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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Beautifully romantic.

Tom Hellert not signed in 4 years ago


Isnt it amazing the exact same stuff- more or less that makes charcoal, is the exact same stuff that makes diamonds...straight up Carbon...This still does not take the "shine" off your lovely work.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

oh that Tom Hellert what a wordsmith .. maybe even a wordjones wordchang...? nitwitt?

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ H Gypsy thank you :)

@ Hi Myownlife thank you :)

@ Hi Jim thank you :)

@ Hi Tom thank you lol :)

@ Hi Cheryl thank you :)

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