Love Forever and a Day

Everlasting love
Everlasting love
Dance our dance of eternal love
Dance our dance of eternal love
Longing for this intimate moment
Longing for this intimate moment
Symbol of our everlasting love
Symbol of our everlasting love

Love Forever and a Day


Your gentle words

With soft emotion

Seep gently through my mind

Lingering thoughts of doubt

Are ebbed away

As we dance our dance of eternal love


If only you knew the truth

Between those lies and deception

Only we will know the extent of this love


In the still of the night

Feeling your body next to mine

Sensually touching, caressing

Longing for this intimate moment


As passion fuels the fire

Our amorous love of a flame so exciting

The joy of our love will always remain

A magical world of peace evermore


This deepened love of ours

Will last beyond the realms

Where time no longer exists

The greatest thing we'll ever learn

Is to be loved and love in return


Past, present, future, always

Forever and a day

Our love will be bonded for ever more

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you suggest one 6 years ago from NOTTINGHAM ENGLAND

Aceatnna,you are such a wonderful romantic,I sincerely hope

you are allowed to remain that way,for the world is a dreary place without romance,you take care my friend.


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vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

simply a beautiful tribute to your love for one another, the romance and love so beautifully described. Great write. I voted you up and awesome.


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ellacor 6 years ago

This is just so beautiful acaetnna, I love the romance. Your poems are always so beautiful and you are both so clearly in love.


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richtwf 6 years ago

Beautiful words of love as always from HP's Goddess of Love!


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

You never fail to make me feel romantic after I read your poems... they are brilliant creations about love and romance! I am so lucky to have met you at HP! =)


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Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

Absolutely amazing as always acatenna, how do you do it? I guess its the way you love and just the skill that you have with words. Beautiful, well done as always.


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

Acaetnna this is so beautiful. You capture the essence of love so well, your words are wonderful.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes Suggest One I am an incurable romantic and the world would be such a better place if we could just have love in our hearts. I love you visiting, thank you so much.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Vietnamvet thank you for your comments and of course for voting this up. Love is the most beautiful emotion and to be loved and to love someone so very much is the best feeling ever.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Yes very much in love Ellacor, I appreciate your visit, thank you


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Richtwf, that's a real honour, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Romance, long may it last. I am so glad I made you feel romantic DjBryle. Thank you for your lovely comments.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Ah thank you Secretmission. Well it certainly helps to feel such emotion and then the words simply pour out. Thank you for your very kind words.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I so appreciate what you say Lovingu, thank you so much.


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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

Sensual hypnotic words as usual, you sail through hubpages in the love boat, cheering us all up. lovely!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

What a wonderful comment Attemptedhumour, thank you. I shall now sail over to your hubs now. Thank you so much for reading my poetry.


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saddlerider1 6 years ago

What a refreshing hub to start my morning with as I sip my Organic Java ever so quietly and gently and caress my lips with it's warmth. Like the Love you so tenderly sweep through our hearts and leave us spellbound by your magic and intensity.

Delightfully romantic, refreshing like a rose pedal stretching under ones nose. I am dancing all over your buttons on this love poem, it's simply brilliant. Hugs


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

It is always such a joy to read your words Saddlerider, thank you. You are a complete romantic at heart yourself you know. You always inspire me with your beautiful words.

Hugs to you too.


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

acaetnna,I'm so glad you are a romantic,that means you will be writing more lovely poems for us to read and enjoy.

Cheers


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Always Exploring - loved your comment. I just write what I feel in my heart and the words just tumble ( maybe rather clumsily) onto the page!


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, Oh wow, that was great! I really loved it, I wish I was an old romantic! ha ha maybe I could write something like this! never mind! cheers nell


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warm_whispers 6 years ago

He is the special person in your life and you consider him your best half. You adore your boyfriend and feel he is the best guy you can ever have in your life. Your partner is the one who supports you and stands by you in the thick and thins of life.

Dear acaetnna if one day a lady tell me what you wrote i will answer her with only short words

Come live in my heart, and pay no rent.


Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

Nicely simple and accessible poem about that universal bond we all search for. Well done.


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Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

Excellent hub my lovely girl, love is like air for you and we love it when you share. Many of us have found it, lost thinking it could be replaces. Surprise, it can never be replaced. To many it only is a once in the life time experience. Hold on tight to the one you love. Rate up up up awesome


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Nell Rose I am sure you are a romantic at heart, most women are. I am so lucky that my man is so romantic too, it's the words he uses and the little things that he does that really count. So pleased you stopped here to read my poem, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Lovely comment as always Warm_whispers. I know that you are a true romantic from reading your own poetry. Thank you again.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Many thanks Doug, I shall be over to read your hubs shortly.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Darlene I always love your comments. Yes to be completely in love is such a wonderful feeling and to feel it even through the ups and downs of life. Once you have loved there is a bond there forever. Thanks Darlene.


shygirl2 6 years ago

wow, lots of comments on this poem. :) I see why...its quite beautiful! Voted it up and awesome.


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

WOW...WOW...WOW. You did it again. I am so happy to hear this from the bottom of your heart. You are a miracle, my dear. You whispering this so gently on my ears. I love you so much. Cheers....

Warmest hugs,

Prasetio


tlmntim9 6 years ago

Beautiful, I love how you paint your pictures of Love!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

Way to go acaetnna... you are cupid's arrow piercing everyone's heart because your aim is so true....


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epigramman 6 years ago

..well ... when I want to feel good .... truly good and warm inside - I make the pilgramage here to bathe in the luxury of your words of love ....and I gave you a shout out over at - Warm Whispers - his poem - In my dreams she comes ... check it out - and one more favor - go to You Tube (your homework assignment - lol) and type in Burt Bacharach and the song What the world needs now - believe me this song this theme this mood perfectly defines you - and what you bring, so sweetly so sincerely, to the man you love - and those of us who love you .....and your writing!!!!!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

This reminds me of "I still believe in ever after with you" :) So beautiful!


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

A very beautiful hub, and such divine words. My, you are the Poet here! I have to rate this up! Acaetnna, your poetry just gets better! This made my day!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Shygirl I appreciate your visit.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Prasetio - you are just so wonderful - thank you so much.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Timntim, you are a delight, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Suburban poet your words are always so magical, no wonder you are an amazing poet. What a wonderful compliment 'you are cupid's arrow piercing everyone's heart because your aim is so true....' Thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Just popped back from Warm_whispers 'In my dreams she comes' - lovely poem and lovely comments from you reference me Epigramman - that was lovely. Now I have been a good girl and done as I was told! Just completed my homework at utube! That was lovely Epigramman and I agree the world would be a much better place if we spread love around. We are making a good start here at Hubpages though aren't we.

Thanks for your great comments as always Epigramman. I shall be back over to read more of your excellent poetry. I am so pleased to see you are writing romantic ones too now! Take care.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Blaise25, yes I just love that song, you just reminded me of it again. Thanks for your lovely comment.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Cheeky Girl you always have the ability to cheer my day. Great to see you here, thanks so much for popping by.


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tnderhrt23 6 years ago

What a touchingly sweet poem! Breath-taking!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi tnderhrt23, glad you stopped to read. Thank you.


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epigramman 6 years ago

...you are coming along so well in your writing - and you have so many loyal dedicated followers now - I am so proud of you - and always proud when you come and visit me too - it is I who also looks up to you!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Epigramman, you always say such wonderful things - I really do appreciate your visit. Thank you.


Website Examiner 6 years ago

An unpretentious but refined poem, presented in a way that invites the reader to follow your thoughts and emotions. Delightful.


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richtwf 6 years ago

I thought I hadn't read this one but I already had! Anyway I voted beautiful again and it was worth the encore! Spread the message of love Lady A and keep sewing the seeds of love into our minds! God bless you!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I always appreciate your comments Website Examiner, thank you.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well it is such a pleasure to see you here again Richtwf, thank you so much for your lovely words.


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kashmir56 6 years ago from Massachusetts

I have enjoyed your beautiful poem written from the heart, you are a very gifted Poet!

Thumbs up!!!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

That is very kind of you Kashmir, thank you so much.


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LaurieDawn 6 years ago

You speak words of love, and beauty Acaetnna. Your words paint a beautiful visual of what love should be. It is a pleasure to "meet" you and thank you for sharing your lovely words with us.

Blessings,

Laurie


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RedElf 6 years ago from Canada

So nice to meet you, acaetnna. I see I have some more reading to do ;)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

It is a joy to have you here LauraDawn and I so thank you very much for your kind words. Take care.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Great to meet you too RedElf thanks for stopping by.


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thougtforce 6 years ago from Sweden

Hello acaetnna,I am so glad I met you here! This poem is lovely, and I was completely sold on the sentence; "as we dance our dance of eternal love". Love is certainly a dance, with sometimes tricky turns, and sometimes everything just flows on smoothly!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

I am so pleased that you came too Thougtforce (great hub name) and I so appreciate your comments, thank you. I shall be over to read your hubs too shortly.


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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

Acaetnna, what beautiful writing on such a cold night. I'm an incurable romantic as well and in love with love. I'm going to read more of you to learn how to express feelings of love better...you surely have the passion and beauty in your words.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Well thank you Erin I am so pleased you are also an incurable romantic and in love with love. It is just such a beautiful sensation, isn't it!


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Lady_E 6 years ago from London, UK

Madre Mia! You are such a Romantic at heart. I enjoyed reading this. It would melt any heart.

Thanks. :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Hi Lady_E I am thrilled that you read my poem and left such lovely comments. Thank you I really appreciate your visit.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

Your awesome, I bet if you just tap out a beat you'd be writing love songs in no time. You'd be a great song writer. Peace :)


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow Katie what a compliment, thank you. I had never thought of being a songwriter . . . !!!


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Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful. I'm like Erin-an incurable romantic. Most of us following you are, and we wait for our next 'fix' from you. :) Enjoyed !


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh thank you Denise. So many ladies are incurable romantics and we are so lucky when we find a man who is too!


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Lovingu 6 years ago from London

I had to come back for a second helping! You are so talented acaetnna.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Gosh thank you so much Lovingu.


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daydreamer13 6 years ago

Lovely!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Daydreamer13.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

You are certainly the great writer of love. We can see your light! Awesomely beautiful!


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Micky, I just love LOVE!


Website Examiner 6 years ago

Madam, do you consider yourself a romantic in love matters only? Or are you a romantic in other aspects of life as well? I am thinking here about the ideals of "romanticism," as espoused in the classic arts, where man is longing to follow the dictates of nature, as opposed to being ruled by the mandates of science, academia, technology and such... Do you think that being romantic, in the sense of being "irrational," is something to pursue even if it means living life dangerously? Things like that, I wonder.


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Pamela99 6 years ago from United States

What a beautiful romantic poem. It is excellent and you certainly have talent.


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

I love the words, forever and a day, how beautiful a thought and a true feeling for those hearts in love as we know true love will last forever and a day. Your such a wonderous blessing I'm so grateful for. Love you work and appreciate each word. May you be radically and abundantly blessed as you share with the world!


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

You have a wonderful way of conveying romance in your words and that is not easy,well done.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Website Examiner, I appreciate what you are saying. I think that there is always an element of romance in whatever I do. I am a complete romantic when it comes to love and yes in the past I have had my fingers burnt. I tend to go by my gut feeling about something although I also like to think of myself as level headed and I do think things through. Sometimes my heart rules my head but that seems to work for me. I think women in general rule with their hearts and I am definitely one of them. I love the arts, adore dancing and singing especially. I love nature and am quite a spiritualist, this again in my opinion is all about feelings. My poetry may seem as though I have thrown myself into this relationship with complete abandon but surely that is the joy of writing, one can write about something that maybe they might desire to experience! I so appreciate your deep and thought provoking comments Website Examiner, thank you so much.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you very much Pamela for your kind comment.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks so much Katie I can always rely on you to say such wonderful things because you understand love so well.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you very much 2uesday.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Very sensual and beautiful, acaetnna. Love can be so deep, and enthralling. You have a way with these words, and they captivate people and command attention and have to be read. I wish more people wrote poetry like you do. You are really writing so many lovely poems these days. :D


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh wow Cathy thanks, I have missed you! I know you have been busy writing your new hub so I shall pop over to read it in a mo. Thanks for your amazing compliments Cathy. Take care.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Gee acaetnna! It's a long way down here! I loved it again. I had forgotten this. I have half-himers, you know.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford Author

Wow I am totally honoured that you came here, but then you are used to long distance aren't you!


hubpageswriter 5 years ago

You are a true romantic poetress, if there's such a word.=) More please.


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Joy56 5 years ago

I see you are very popular, and your poetry is a reflection of you...... I am so happy i found you.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh thank you Hubpageswriter - I have missed you but know you've been busy generating more exciting hubs.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

It is wonderful to see you here and receive your awesome comments - thanks Joy56.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

I love your love poems the atmosphere of romance can be felt in each one, and this beautiful addition is no different, great job!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you Nighthag I am so pleased you enjoyed this.


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chrissie123 5 years ago

wow this was beautiful! You are definitely becoming one of my fav poets!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thanks Chrissie that's terrific. Glad you enjoyed it.


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Shil1978 5 years ago

So delightfully romantic - I am not much of a poet (I am awful really), nor know much about poetry, but this made for wonderful reading. I admire those who can write poetry or are good at any of the arts!!

You have a gift many others don't - so keep on writing! Hope to catch up on your forthcoming works :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

I know that you are great with words Shil1078 and I so appreciate your comments. Thank you.


TattoGuy 5 years ago

Look above, ya see all those comments, they are from your fans like me who love reading your poems so please write some more for us, ya lazy git, I blame all that lovin ; ) x


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Ha Ha all that loving or lack of time or lack of inspiration maybe!! Watch this space. Love the new profile pic!


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Beautiful, acaetnna. Very beautiful! Lovely!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Thank you so much Freya, I am glad you enjoyed it!


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Lovely poem. The title is awesome too. Love is more than forever.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Truckstop Sally I thank you. I totally agree with you as you have appreciated from my poem.


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devsir 5 years ago from Earth

heart touching words. you are the magician in use of words for the love poems. your poems create a great magic. I love you for your poems


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford Author

Oh Devsir thank you so much. I shall be hopping back to your hubs shortly - thank you so much for your comments, very much appreciated.

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