Love Hard

BitterSweet

Burning kiss

passions flame.

Take me wild

and untamed.

Rough me up,

love me down.

In your arms

I will drown.

Hurt me gently,

love me sweet.

Bodies boiling,

feel the heat.

Steal my breath,

smother me.

Cut me open

set me free.

Pressure building

deep inside.

Release it in

Erotic tides.

Abuse my body

with loving eyes.

Stab me softly

until passion dies.

Hold me tightly

in the end.

Until I'm ready

to die again.

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misc-disc 4 years ago from Greater Earth Area

Impeccable rhythm; very good.


Johnbgood 4 years ago

This one was awesome Keep it up thank you


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great romantic poem. You wrote so well.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you writer 20, and johnbgood. I appreciate the comments


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you crescent I appreciate the comment. Blessings


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

oh wow. i like this fast, sensual rhythmic union that captures the intimacy of such so well. The lean simplicity of this poem is adorned with great visual imagery. Awesome. weirdly enough i am holidaying in Florida and keep discovering more and more hubbers who live here!


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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you Docmo, I enjoy writing feelings and emotions. I try to capture each one. I appreciate the comment, blessings


Johnnybgood 4 years ago

I get a different feeling every times read it thanks I just need to


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4elements 4 years ago Author

your welcome.

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