Love--Just Love...Right?

Love--how your sweet tenderness and loving soul bestowed this heart of mine. Dive into the sea of paradise--just wondrous, just wondrous. Like love bird sweet chirp in early spring.

Love-- is a form of paradise, beautiful like heaven made rainbow-- angelical, glorious, and magnificent. It lullabies your heart and blind your eyes, every tender word whisper to your ear, your heart soften, beaten out of rhythm. Everything she tells you or he tells you, you say and think it’s true.

Love-- start with a seed of apple and it grew. Soon it start to blossom and became a fruit. Each fruit is different though it is from the same tree. Its apple, yet, some are sour and some are sweet. Some are juicy sweet yet with worms and some are sour but delight.

Love—is poisonous and addictive, like spell being cast by a cupid. Wrapped like a gift of goodies; drift in his arm... far away...leaving everything else behind.

Love-- dangerous like mass of grave buried so deep. Pierce this heart and implant thorn; self-esteem, self-love, and daily living burns into ashes. Dried like rose, deteriorate like dead body...lonesome, hurts

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Irob 4 years ago from St. Charles

very nice

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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California.

Hi Chanroth, Beautifully written and expressivly said. Greg

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time2rite 4 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

Chanroth, this is a very bittersweet but beautiful piece. The illustrations you used are very emotive in and of themselves. Voted "Up" and "Beautiful.

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem, written so well, vote up and awesome, Joyce.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome! Your right unfortunately a lot of times love hurts but it can also be beautiful if it is the right love.

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ImKarn23 4 years ago there anything more painful and joyful at the same time! Beautifully written!

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dilipchandra12 4 years ago from India

Lovely hub chanroth, it is beautiful...

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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello everyone, thank you very much for commenting, reading, and voting! I appreciate it. @imKarn23, is there anything else more painful and joyful? :) hehe...thank you


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

nice work... and the presentation is fabulous!

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