Love Like Ours

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Oh My Baby
You are all I ever need
Your lips is what I long for
My toes long for you
Your hair smells like roses
Your body pressed to mine


It makes me sweat and love you even more
Why can't I see that everything is Okay
I am so amazed
This is best feeling
The innocence is the perfect


Please don't go away
I hold on to it
Please don't let it pass us by
This is the best feeling
Our Love!


The innocence
This moment is perfect
Please don't go away
I need you now
Even when I think I am dreaming you're the only dream I want to have


By Zia Uddin

Lady Antebellum - Need You Now

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

such BEAUTY MY FRIEND.. I AM POSTING YOU AND SUBMITTING YOUR POEM FOR THE CONTEST.. WOW all i can say ,, so romantic..

mmm

debbie


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CMCastro 3 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

Such a romantic poet you are. I hope your dream does come true! Very beautiful loving words.


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Charu Bhatnagar 3 years ago from India

nice, passionate poem.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This is real nice and so romantic. Enjoyed much. Passing this on.


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Thank you all for commenting.


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GinaBina4 3 years ago from West Tennessee

This is so romantic & heartfelt. Great job!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

this is so beautiful I had to visit again.. just beautiful..

many blessings

Debbie


Sannel 3 years ago

Romantic and very beautiful! A passionate read, indeed. Keep up the good work. I look forward to read more poetry by you. Thank you. Up votes and sharing on FB!

Sannel


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Beautiful and exceptionally well-done considering it is your first poem. voting up awesome!


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blondey 3 years ago

Very nice poem, brings back nice memories!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

This is truly beautiful and I now look foward to so many more by you.

I vote up,across and share all around.

Eddy.


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Zia.. you have a wonderful poem all of us women love it.. blessings my friend.. Let everyone know you are alright.. you have a lot of people worried about you

Debbie


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Zia,

"Even when I think I am dreaming you're the only dream I want to have"

So beautiful and romantic.

Voted up and away

Take care :)


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Zia...consider yourself with a new fan- ME! (poor you..lol)..

i absolutely adored the fresh, clean honesty of your effort here~

Very impressive and can see you getting better and better!

Now - let's try to get a little traffic over here to appreciate your talent..

Will pin, share forward and post to my fb page as well..

good luck!

(ps...thank Deb for getting my lazy ass over here...lol)


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Look Leslie it's nothing but women here .. WE ALL LOVE YOU ZIA!!!!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Your poetry is so very beautiful, passionate and romantic and speaks of such longing for just knowing that love really still remains for that One, the one and only one who your heart truly desires so.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

"my toes long for you"

Wow! very passionate. Beautiful poem, Zia.


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Thanks for commenting ImKarn23, glad you liked it. I also appreciate your help and support, thanks again.


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Faith Reaper - Thanks for your lovely comment, really appreciate it.


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Debbie - Hi Debbie, thanks for your comment. I am fine and will see you soon hopefully.


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Wayne - Thanks for taking the time to read my hub, really appreciate your feedback also. Wish me success in writing more poetry and I wish you all the success too.


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web923 3 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

Amazing poem and I'm happy to add you to my "follow list"


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aziza786 3 years ago Author

Thank you so much web923 for taking the time to pass by my hub, really appreciate it. Thanks for following me too, and voted you up for that one, smile.


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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

This is very nice. You do a lovely job of expressing passionate love and the desire to hold on to it.

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