Love Notes For Her

Love Notes For Her

I couldn't find myself anywhere,

Don't remember where I was,

Always lost in your thought,

As if my soul is yours,

I am searching myself in your big beautiful eyes,

Want to listen to my soul through your voice,

But I couldn't find myself.

May be because your eyes are like sea,

Deep and unending,

Like time and eternity.

And your voice,

So lively and vibrant,

Doesn't allow me to think about myself.

Your long black shining hair,

Are like dense jungles,

If lost, one can never conquer.

I have given up the hope that I can find myself,

So be with me and don't leave me in pain and despair.

Comments 24 comments

Laura 6 years ago

i am a girl:

who wrote this? it is so beautiful. i would marrysomebody who wrote me that. ;)


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vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

i wrote it....but i cant marry u....sorry

:)

thanks for your comment


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Mark Bronze 6 years ago

Nicely composed. Well done. Lets have some more!


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vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

thanks Mark

will reconsider your thought


M.Ray 6 years ago

Excellent expression in search of love.


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saket71 6 years ago from Delhi, India

Very well written, Sonam. Can see you are getting some really rave reviews. one small edit, consider changing "Doesn't allow me of thinking about myself." to "Doesn't allow me to think about myself" but then when emotions are guiding, grammer can be forgiven..very well written, must write more.


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vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

thanks for the correction...


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vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

will try to more things which i can share every now and then....like you


Dsouza 6 years ago

Hey Vishal, well done buddy, Who is your inspiration??


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

This is so beautiful. To receive a love not like this would be heaven.


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vishal.rossi 6 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

thanks Dsouza and Acaetnna


shygirl2 5 years ago

Very warm and tender thoughts of love from the heart. Your girl is lucky to be the receiver of such high praise and devotion. Beautiful love poem, vishal.rossi. :D


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vishal.rossi 5 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

thanks :)


Riddhi Hathiwala 5 years ago

vry beautiful vishal... i loved the meaning of the poem...


Payal Rawat 5 years ago

Vishal Cool yaar u write so well!!!! in a single word WOW!!!


Pranjal Sharma 5 years ago

well written vishal.... Kp goin on & on..... :)


Pranjal Sharma 5 years ago

One thing we can never receive enough is love,

One thing we can never give enough is...... love!! :)

May your love and inspiration grows from strength to strength.... someone with such words deserves lots :) :)

God bless you! :)


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Ingenira 5 years ago

Nice work. Beautiful. :)


............ 4 years ago

thats awesome im going to give it to my crush


who dat 4 years ago

send me to mars and call me a marhsin that was beautiful


who dat 4 years ago

send me to mars and call me a marsh-in that was beautiful


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vishal.rossi 4 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

just mention her that your friend has written it and u like it..


Aveshnear 4 years ago

Man this is awsome my gf is so happy when I told her this that's y I think she's still with me! Thanks may God Bless You and your family! :)


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vishal.rossi 3 years ago from Helsinki, Finland Author

It's good that your gf is happy and you are still together. As for me, this poems means nothing more than a piece of writing now.

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