Love Unmade

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I wish you'd ask me what I'm thinking

For unlike you it is not "nothing"

It is actually quite something

Worth the close of that book


Ask me and I would describe

Visions of your hand sliding

Mischievously pushing my gown aside

Awakening sleeping curves


I would tell of tiny goosebumps

Raising across my belly at the thought

Of your heated breath at my navel

Lips brushing gentle kisses there


And then confess of longing

To be held in your palm

Warm and safe my most sacred place

Blooming in your hand


But you won't ask

And I won't tell

And we will sleep and I will dream

Of love unmade

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Hmrjmr1 5 years ago from Georgia, USA

Haven't seen ya for a while RB- another great poem hits right to the heart of it.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hmrjmr1-Thought it was time Randy did something in keeping with her name. :)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

Nice job on this Randy. You kept it interesting and romantic without giving us too much. Beautiful writing:)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Minnetonka Twin... its a fine line I love to walk!

Cheers


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Welcome back Rand Behavior, you had me at the goose bumps:0)and love unmade as I rolled over and zzzzzzzzz.

How sad, I would prefer to be at the navel with lips brushing gentle kisses there, okay now I'm off to the showers, cold, brrrrrrrr. he he.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

You were here reading me Saddlerider while I was over there reading you. :)


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Wow what a coincidence ESP working at it's finest. Cheers Thank you for paying me a visit, much appreciated, and sorry for the chills, goose bumps feel better:0)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I no longer believe in coincidences. So many stories out there sitting on the curbs. I am not brave enough to hear them. Thanks for that peek.


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marcofratelli 5 years ago from Australia

I don't like when love is not made!! But I love your writing and even more so, your avatar - it's still the best!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I don't like it either. Pitfall of relying on ESP. Thank you Marco.


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Joyus Crynoid 5 years ago from Eden

Mmmm...tonight at bedtime I'll think twice before opening that book, and be sure to ask my wife what she's thinking...

Thanks RB!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Now you're thinking!


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Argh! Nothing worse than love unmade -- well, being attacked by giant spiders would be worse, but missing romantic opportunities pretty much sums up my teenage years and early twenties.

This poem is great. I really like your clear, imagery-laden style. You rock, Randy B.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

No sweeter compliment could be laid upon me, thank you. I do so love to rock.


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RandomLife 5 years ago from Nashville TN

Another great hub! I enjoyed reading =)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm glad you like my naughtiness RandomLife.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well there is nothing unmade here about my love for your writing - it's making me feel a little mentally unchallenged at the moment - and it's true though you are one of the great ones here - so Hubpages dosen't get too tepid!


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Very warm! Thank you ma'am!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hey Epigramman, I just finished a spicy one but don't know if HP would like it.

I do what I can in the cold season Micky.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

Nice one RB. What's your partner doing asleep? Crazy. I wouldn't be alseep. Have you read my Hub 'Clitaclysmic'. I did go too far to see what would happen. The hub is posted, but they took away all advertising. Have a read, let me know what you think. Tony


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'll go have a read. I have a couple like that, one got 35,000 views before I had to take it down.


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Mr.Moonlight 5 years ago from Tampa (SoHo)

Nice work, this poem. It struck a nerve.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Glad you came by Mr.Moonlight.

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