Lovers On A Pond (poem)

Was on a pond a tender moonlit night

Two lovers met to dance amid the air

Such was the love this couple had to share

That fantasies and dreams they would ignite

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And every heart was taken by this pair

The trees and flowers marveled at their sight

The stars would glow and wish on pure delight

If ever love was perfect it was there

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But no one knows what happened the two

Some say a dark unknown had marked their end

A jealousy awakened by their bond

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Still even now their moments are in view

As time itself these lovers would transcend

Whenever lovers kiss upon the pond

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Incredible feeling here and and the photo explains many emtions


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

This is very creative. I see ghosts of lovers past looking on at current lovers by the pond. Sweet!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Your poems get better and better Martin and I am also a great fan of Richard Clayderman.

Voted up and shared.

Eddy.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

I agree with bravewarrior, this is the image I get too. Two souls lingering on the pond wathing other lovers and perhaps smiling.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very dramatic with the image of the waterfall. Splashing indeed!

I must have had to go on to bed last night before this was posted.

Catching up here. Up and more and sharing.

Hugs, Faith Reaper


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Romantic and epic poetry.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Life can be different after people settle dow, no doubt about that. Complacency is a hard lesson to learn.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Another beautiful, sooo romantic poem. Love it.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Both the poem and the pic are provocative. Much enjoyed.

Happy First Day of Fall,

Kim


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nighthag 3 years ago from Australia

Romantic dreaming abounds here, just wonderful

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