Lover’s Vow (limerick)

To lover this vow I once made

Devotion to her will not fade

For under her spell

Life’s meaning now fell

At least till motel bill was paid


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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

For some reason I can only say; Let us love


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

You had me going.

I fell for the first few lines. LOL


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

It started romantically... and I fell for it. Funny!


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breakfastpop 2 years ago

Promise her anything......


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Ryem 2 years ago from Maryland

Lol What a great ending!


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

Awesome turn around Martin. Jamie


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Love the ending!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Always pay your bills no matter what.

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