Love's Perfect storm

Love's Perfect Storm

Lightening strikes, Thunder calls.

See my eyes, as the rain falls.

Hand on heart, as it quakes.

The simplest touch, shiver and shake.

Tornado whirling, inside my head.

Take me now, forget the bed.

Open my flower, quench its thirst.

Gentle later, I want fast first.

Volcano eruption, orgasmic delight.

Not holding back, not going to fight.

Soft kisses, start the storm.

Erotic tides, loves passion born.

Hurricane winds, all around.

Love me now, love me abound.

Sexual fires, burning the flesh.

My body, your body begin to mesh.

Feed the hunger until nothings left.

Exhausted and glowing, finally at rest.

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shakti bhardwaj 5 years ago from india

awesome :)

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Seafarer Mama 5 years ago from New England

Love it, especially "take me now, forget the bed." :0)

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Ghaelach 5 years ago

Hi 4elements.

Seems to me you had a "Tsunami Explosion". Never mind a wirlwind or hurricane. When i sit back and think of all that went on the hair stands up on my arms. Wonderfull and up

LOL Ghaelach

4elements 5 years ago

Thank you all for comments. I do enjoy them

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ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

Whooaaaaa, erotic, exotic, you've got it all goin' on, sistah! Your rhythm just flows oh so well. Your choice of words just perfect. Voted up and very awesome!

4elements 5 years ago

Thank you exotic queen. I do appreciate it. Blessings

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Just_Rodney 5 years ago from Johannesberg South Africa, The Gold Mine City

From the other side

that passionate hot rush

that intense need

that pleasant promise

of slower


more passionate


.... later

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JadedLove 5 years ago

It is always a beautiful feeling seeing you write. You still amaze me. So much more than up and beautiful, but that's what they allow. Awesome

4elements 5 years ago

Thanks jaded. I actually wrote that when on my way home from new york

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Scarface1300 5 years ago

A great piece of writing...Thanks

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Glad you liked it of my favorites

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