Loving Whole

With Half a Heart

There are so many emotions

that I am going through.

One thing is certain,

Ti's my love for you.

So low to the ground

or as high as the sky.

Being without you

my heart slowly dies.

I do my best to

try and stand tall.

But without you

baby I just fall.

Being without you is

like a poet without words.

I will not give up

because my heart is yours.

It beats your name

weather you are near or far.

Without you baby

my sky has no stars.

My breath still pauses

when I think of you.

My love is strong

for you it's true.

Space and time is

what you say you need.

I will do my best to give,

but know my heart bleeds.

While you are on your

path of discovery.

I will be here waiting

for your recovery.

All though my heart is

whole inside my chest.

It will only beat half,

while on your quest.

Come back to me baby,

and set my world right.

Because without you my love,

Ti's the darkest of nights.

Comments 7 comments

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

You've written a wonderful poem.

Voted up ans beautiful.

4elements 4 years ago

Thank you very much writer 20 sometimes I write what I feel and sometimes I write what I imagine it would feel like. Blessings

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winphatak 4 years ago from Pune,India

Breathtaking and just wonderful. Voting up.

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Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

Really flowing and wonderful poem!

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4elements 4 years ago Author

Thank you very much winphatak, I appreciate the kind words. Blessings to you.

angela Brummer thank you as well. I appreciate your time and comment for my words, blessings to you and to both, Peace, love, and light.

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Writing what we feel brings out the best writing in us... as we see here.. enchanting and engrossing piece of poetry

4elements 4 years ago

Thank you rahul0324, I appreciate the comment blessings and again thank you.

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