Low Battery

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In the wee hours of the morn
She was torn between two pillows
Pure ecstasy escalates;
A blinking Indicator become
A disruptive behavior: suddenly
A dishonorable discharge

Sorry low battery.

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The Invincible 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

Did you forget to add more stuff in it? lol! ;)


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

sometimes in poetry is better not to show, you allowed your audience to

use his/her brain.

thank you so much for reading..


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PDXKaraokeGuy 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Brilliant. Great word choice!


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Darknlovely3436 3 years ago from NewYork Author

thank you for commenting

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