MY THOUGHTS...by b. Malin

WHAT'S IT ALL ABOUT...

A Partner you can Trust...Lots of Love,

And Some Pixie Dust.

Money in your Retirement Years...

Not too many Government Fears.

Going out to Eat, and still considering it a Treat,

Because you can have Anything you want to Eat!

Leave us ALONE, we'll be eating HEALTHY at home!

Walking a Mile in the Sand with my Lover Man.

Seeing my Sons Happy and still Friends.

Seeing my Granddaughters every now and then.

Wishing my Country to be a Happy place,

Proud of it's Heritage is not a disgrace.

Salute every Solider, shake his or her hand,

And Thank them for keeping us Safe,

While Fighting in Some Foreign Land.

Wishing the News and Reporters didn't have SELECTIVE HEARING,

Then the "Elderly" would have less Fearing.

Make it Easier for Business to START...Stop REGULATING,

AND REGULATING them till they start up overseas...

And People in this Country have to get down on their Knees,

And say PLEASE, I need a job...

Because they still believe in the American Dream.

And isn't that, what it's all about?

Just My Thoughts...

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Fiddleman 5 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

...and some great thoughts these are. I like the part about getting o your knees but not to ask for a job but to thank God for being so mindful of me.


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Your thoughts beautifully echo the thoughts we are all feeling. Up awesome and beautiful.


mikeq107 5 years ago

Great Thoughts for the present Time VVVVVVVVVVV Aplause :0)


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi b.Malin I echo your thoughts, brilliant writing and voted up!


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A.A. Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

Amen...


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I second the Amen with another Amen:0) on your thoughts, you speak of a perfect world, I hope we get it back soon before it's to late.


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lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

Beutifully written and expresses so clearly what's in my heart.


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50 Caliber 5 years ago from Arizona

b. Malin a wonderful arrangement of thought that I can relate. I liked the closing line as America is the last stand, as I see no place better than this land, where would one run with no new frontiers to conquer we are left to respect what we've got and try to build it back up to where all like and support their neighbors, peace dust


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The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

Good thoughts too! 4 Stars to you malin.

The Frog


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Chatkath 5 years ago from California

Not such difficult requests? One would think not! So here is some pixie dust and a magic wand....just in case! ;-)


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, great thoughts, not much to ask is it? but sadly these days it seems to get harder and harder, cheers nell


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Fiddleman, I'm so glad you liked my Thoughts and a little prayer for those who Love this Country and all it stands for.

Thanks Breakfastpops, a day doesn't go by that we all don't Think and Pray for our fellow Man, and the Hardships in our World today.

Mikeq, I am so Sad for the Times we now Live in and Pray they get better. Thank you.


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AliciaC 5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

These are great sentiments, b. Malin. It would be a wonderful in any country if your wishes were fulfilled. I'd like some pixie dust too please!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

A.A. Amen is Right, and Peace to us all.

Not a Perfect World Saddlerider, I don't think that would happen, but we need it to be Much, Much, better than it is right now...I too hope we can get it back before it's too late.

Icbenefield, thanks for your acknowledgement of my Thoughts and thanks for feel the same way too.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Alicia some "Pixie Dust" is now heading your way...Enjoy! Thank you for agreeing with my Sentiments...Who know's, they just may happen.

50 Caliber, I'm so glad you could relate to my Thoughts, and I Love what YOU have added, such Beautiful Thoughts of your own my Friend...And some Peace Dust to you too!

Hey Frog Prince Thank You for my 4 Stars, I shall Treasure them...And some "Pixie Dust" to you!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Chatkath, Please keep a little "Pixie Dust" for yourself as well! And thank you my friend for your Thoughts as well.

I know Neil, in the times we live in EVERYTHING seems to be harder to come by and People need a Break. Thanks for your Thoughts as well.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Cheryl. My Political pulse is Raging and this is the way as a Writer, that I can let it out. I know a lot of People feel this way, I just put My Thoughts out there.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

What a thoughtful tribute to life here in the US! I love it. Up, beautiful, and awesome.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank You WillStarr for your Thoughtful comments and acknowledgement, so appreciated!


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alocsin 5 years ago from Orange County, CA

Lovely. I'm voting this Up and Beautiful.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Alocsin, I so appreciate your comment and for voting my Hub UP and Beautiful!


september girl 5 years ago

I really liked your thoughts on things. So good to know other Americans still appreciate their homeland, as I do. Great hub!


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sweetie1 5 years ago from India

Beautiful poem and i am happy that you have a happy family. Also about USA even though its economy is down like never before yet it is still a most sought after destination by most people in world who want to immigrate to some other country.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank You Sept.girl. This is still the Greatest Country to live in....However, I am afraid unless things are done for the people that voted Washington Congress & Senators into office, I am truly afraid for the first time in my life time.

This is so True Sweetie, but they Must come here Legally. So Glad you like my Thoughts, and yes, we've worked hard to be Happy and that's the secret...to pass on, under normal times, these are Not normal times for everyone.


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vocalcoach 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

The tears filled my eyes as I read each line with a powerful feeling of want...why can it not be this way? I only have complete control over my thoughts which give energy and truth to my actions.

When I take my daily walk blessing the beauty of mother nature's "children" - the power of trees, the singing of birds, the cushion of soil beneath my feet, the spacious sky and billowy clouds,and sweet clear air to breathe, I pretend that all you have written above is true.

I had to rate Up and each button, with the exception of funny. There is nothing funny about wanting such a perfect world. Hugs.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

You have made some Beautiful and Heartfelt Comments Vocalcoach. I am sure they too come from your Writers Soul...Thank You so much for your Thoughts and Votes dear Friend, LOL.


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James A Watkins 5 years ago from Chicago

I sincerely enjoyed reading your thoughts today. I agree with you. Thanks for sharing. :)


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank You so much James for Enjoying My Thoughts...I always Enjoy Yours!


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Very great thoughts shared here..ones to commit to the heart..thank you.

Sunnie


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

This is a great poem. Of course all the regulations in effect right now and forever in America are for the big business. The small business has a hell of a time getting off the ground. I know damn well of what I speak. I've been the small businessman and America is FOREVER FOR the big bu$ine$$. And I - in turn - HATE big bu$ine$$ and hope it's stomped out some day. It's sad to see PRO-BIG-Bu$ine$$ government a$ i$. America is as free as long as the money holds up. The hardship that the small business goes through is deplorable. Our history is selective. Thanks for a nice poem.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Sunnie Thanks for your Comments on My Thoughts, I so appreciate your opinion.

Micky Dee, Thanks so much for Expressing your Thoughts, and for liking mine. You are so right about Big Business verses Small Business...Now "Borders Book Stores" who put a lot of Mom and Pop Book stores out of Business...Is going under because of the Internet, Kindle. It's a Scary World we live in now.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Awesome in all ramification. Brilliant and well written

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