Madness (tanka)

Darkness claimed the night

When victim fell into lair

Of madness and death

And with the last screams was heard

Forgive me for what I am

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bravewarrior 21 months ago from Central Florida

Hopefully he was saved by his final plea.

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The Examiner-1 21 months ago

I guess that it was his last plea for help.


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Lee Cloak 21 months ago

Brilliantly crafted, a really dramatic piece, very enjoyable, thanks, Lee

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tobusiness 18 months ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Powerful words and image. Well done!

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