Magic Moments To Die For (limerick)

How magic the moments we spent

When on the lake swimming we went

It was so sweet

To help retain heat

You tucked my feet in cement


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Hello. I have been away for a while.. and I come back to read this delightful limerick tonight.. lol thank you for making me laugh my friend

I love it.. I can always depend on you to make me smile

hugs

Debbie


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL...I was so busy looking at the picture that I almost missed the punch line. Great one Martin!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Hahaha, the whole thing just made me start to laugh out loud.


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

lol. Another funny one! thank you!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well you certainly caught my attention with that picture - maybe someone should cement her cleavage into the sidewalk at the Hub Hall of fame - but because I am pretending to be a writer here with integrity and conviction I must say the words which followed - were the true icing on the cake and very witty and surprising too

lake erie time 1:59am


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Ah, that's a real boo boo, to have your feet stuck in cement while swimming! Funny, MHatter!! Sharing!


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Bet that was a gotcha moment! lol


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arb 4 years ago from oregon

Women can be so attentive at times. Feet usually get so little notice. What a sweetheart!


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Another great funny to start my day!


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

See what happens when easily distracted. First smile of the day


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

The booze tasted so good when downed

I never noticed as you face frowned

I kissed you last

and thought of past

underwater as I was drowned.

Good job, my friend!


Valleypoet 4 years ago

She is going a bit overboard....or should I say, he is...LOL:-))


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

What a woman!!... she even got a photo for posterity. :). a beaut!


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mpropp 4 years ago from Minnesota

Ouch! Zing, you got me there...the picture distracted me, but i should have know from the title! I'm not really a foot person, but whatever floats your boat!


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pstraubie48 4 years ago from sunny Florida

O dear...not a friend we need...it could happen to any of us...still chuckling Voted UP....and I need a laughing out loud with tears rolling down my cheeks button ....ps


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I have heard of people doing terrible things to those that were asleep. My mother told me once that my father was growing a mustache. She shaved off half of it while he was abed.


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cat on a soapbox 4 years ago from Los Angeles

Ha Ha, Judging from the picture here, I'm guessing you were clueless during the process!


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Ardie 4 years ago from Neverland

Very funny - the poor guy! Ah well, at least he will be warm now =)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Good one. Nothing like cement shoes. lol


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Wonderful Limmerick as always my dear friend.

Eddy.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

OMG...'Tucked"...you said 'tucked'...lol

had to check twice, M!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

HaHaHaHa, can't stop LOL. one of your best. I gotta quit reading after Leslie, she cracks me up too. Hee..


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b. Malin 4 years ago

I needed a GOOD Laugh today, thanks "Mhatter" for providing it!


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

you crack me up! Thanks for the good laugh.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Thanks for the much needed laugh.


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

This was a really good one!

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