Oh, Lover

A knock on the door, I open and greet

With a smile and show you the seat

Sit still don’t move as I work my way

I run my fingers as they happily play


Eyes meet, my legs curl around your waist

Your hands lock the rim as you braced

I move left and roll, move right and roll

Your body, so loud it screams outta control


Tonight it’s all you no one else I say

Take me now for I will be your prey

Your hands my hands all over the place

A rip at the seam of my panty lace


The panting begins as the heat rises

Two bodies groaning with chastises

The movement begins getting deeper

Telling me baby I think I found a keeper


Finder’s keepers and those who lose

Well let them weep while singing their blues

Oh lover, I call to you don’t stop

Until I reach the highest atmosphere up top.


bellawritter23(copyright)2011


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

very erotic Bella, nicely done, I really like this one.


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Oh to just stand there, static and steeped

Waiting for an angel, breathless and deep

He waited for the moment she opened her door

Wound ten thousand times for wondrous amor

Soon with a slow swing a vision stood hence

A maiden from the heaven beyond all common sense

She guided him through heavens own portal

Sat him down lovingly beyond all that's known mortal

At loss for all words as living a dream

Soon sitting and caressing just aching to scream

A lifetime of wishes all now coming to pass

As clothing and lacing fall silent and fast

Two bodies as one, such heat and great passion

All notions of restraint melt as a last bastion

Soon notions of all else fade into the night

As two lovers come one, an endless delight...

....

Way hot girl.....time for a cold shower.... :P


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

OMG!! I can't compete with the comment above but i'll try. This was torrid, full of lust and satisfaction. The rhyming was perfect. Well done.

Smiles


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Viet, Thank you I like it too inspired by a song :)

Billy Bear, Its been a while that I have heard from you so to that this was very beautiful I tell you, you have to publish these very beautiful.

Always, thank you very much :)

bella


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Bella- what a restless, steamy tale.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Mck, Lol yes I agree.

B.


Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

Erotic, sensual, and of course beautiful.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Binaya, Thanks a mill!!

Bella


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b. Malin 5 years ago

I Love It...and Ride that Wave girlfriend...on TOP Bella!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

B., Lol hahahahahh that made me laugh! ;)

bella


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

An intimate prowl Bella...Awesome!;)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thanks Acer.

B.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

Awesome, seductive piece of work here Bella. Nice job!

Sharyn


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

thanks Sharyn!

bella


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Moi Bella....Te desidero..

I hope you are well, my dear friend...

Sorry, I have been gone... my world is changing...


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

I could only imagine Billy Bear I am here you have my phone number use it at any time please dont hesitate :)

your friend bella ;)


kikkibabes 5 years ago

Brilliant! x


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Kikkibabes, Awww thanks a bunch :)

bella


kikkibabes 5 years ago

Your very welcome.. love reading your hubs. x

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