Make me feel loved

I did everything you wanted


Just as perfect as I could


But no matter what I did for you


That never seemed to be quite enough


Nothing ever seemed to make you happy


You cruel and heartless excuse for a man


The nerve you had to treat me so badly


I have never had anybody make me feel so worthless


You made me feel like a useless piece of trash


I treated you like a king, put you on a pedestal


I gave you all of me


My heart and soul, my everything


All you ever gave me was heartache and pain


I wasn't asking for too much


Just wanted you to make me feel loved


Some good did come from this though


I know now you never really loved me


The only thing you loved was your control over me


I no longer need you to make me feel loved


I can do that all on my own


Peace out jerk


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

It's a no-win situation anytime we work so hard to make someone happy. Happiness comes from the relationship, and the two people loving each other. It should never be necessary to try and make a lover happy.

Lovely work!


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Angela Blair 4 years ago from Central Texas

Wonderful, succinct message and beautifully written. Billbuc's right, you know -- it's in the sharing of two -- not the catering of one! Best/Sis


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prettynutjob30 4 years ago from From the land of Chocolate Chips,and all other things sweet. Author

Thank you I know that now so very glad I learned from my past ex's what I never wanted again.I actually have them to thank for me meeting my hubby he is so different from my ex's.


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michiganman567 4 years ago from Michigan

Very clear message. And Billybuc leaves a comment to live by. Thanks for sharing


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

He should have been the one giving you the royal treatment. He doesn't deserve you. I am not an expert, but I know he will come back looking for you pleading for forgiveness to take him back. Don't believe any of his lies. This is just a way to reel you back in and once he has you where he wants, then he will go back to his old ways. I would just cut off all communication with him phone, text, email and tell him to get lost! If he doesn't, get a restraining order.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

That's right give that person what they gave you nothing, Joyce


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Way to go. If they're not worth your love throw them away. Great poem.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

The hardest thing is to walk away, but when you are not getting what you need from a relationship, walk away you must. This is just awesome, well done.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Great and beautifully written poem, it is hard to leave a relationship when you love someone,but if they don't love you must leave and find someone who does love you .

Vote up and more !!!

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