Make A Moment (poem)

Let’s make a moment time will not forget

To cast a dream for all the world to view

And prove that wonders really do come true

For hearts whose fragrant blossoms never set


Let’s favor stars of hope which brought us here

By fanning flames of lovers’ fantasies

Till pure imagination scents the breeze

And dance again each time a kiss is near


Tomorrows turn our memories to gold

To settle at the bottom of life’s stream

Let’s bear no shadow ever mar our gleam

Whenever once was beauty is retold


Let’s make a moment in eternal sky

A promise which will never say goodbye

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Tuatha 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

Every wonderful experience deserves a good verse. Thank You!

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Special one here, Mh, as to hope and never allowing one's dreams to end.

Up and more and sharing

Hugs, Faith Reaper

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ashelladyhawke 3 years ago from California

The depth of love expressed so beautifully. Just for a moment in time. How true that is because that moment will not come around again. Beautiful thumbs up.

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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

"....Let’s make a moment in eternal sky

A promise which will never say goodbye"

....wowww...its beautiful and direct from heart.....loved every bit of it. Thank you very much for this one. Shared and votes way up.

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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Very nice sentiments expressed here, and I enjoyed the rhyming scheme as well. Voted up and more.

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Oh, Martin, you have touched every human heart. This writing

is universal. We all want some moment in time to remain eternal.

The incredible song was so appropriate with her lovely delicate lacy

voice singing while lovers shared a day together. From time to time

they gazed into their lover's eyes and made their moment to remember.

Simply exquisite, Martin!


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Very well written Martin. I hope all is well, you sure have been producing alot lately, I am a little jealous. jamie

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Moments to remember are suspended in our memory like sparking drops of dew on the morning grass. Love this poem.

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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

Your love poems are so beautiful, Martin. The ideas in this poem are lovely.

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PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

Great poem Mhatter! I liked this one alot.

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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Martin. This one is very nice Martin, very thoughtful.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

So beautiful. I love this poem.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Another beautiful verse Martin.

Keep them coming and enjoy your day.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Thank you for this wonderful verse.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This was just lovely and romantic and I'm pearling it.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Beauty takes so many forms. Thanks again, Martin.

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