Make A Wish (limerick)

A wife wishing at wishing well

When down the well her husband fell

Insults he was dishing

As she heard him swishing

But boy did her wishing work swell

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Angelo52 4 years ago from Central Florida

Nice. Made me smile. Sharing.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Where did you get that pictures? A classic!


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

I think your humor may be twisting up a bit! lol


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Oh that is tragic thought. The picture is unique, colorful and bright.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Where can I get one of those...:) :))

Simply wicked!!!


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cam8510 4 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

Okay. The first two of your limericks I read today had a common theme. Is there something you need to talk about MH? Love the rhythm of limericks. You put them together very well.


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leroy64 4 years ago from Dallas, Texas (Oak Cliff)

Got it. If I ever get married, I need to keep my wife away from wells.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

try to figure out how I sign my limericks


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cam8510 4 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

I am not sure if all limericks have the exact same metre, but you use 88668 in terms of syllables.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Awe, well well well... LOL Awesome job!


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Motherbynature 4 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

Bravo! This one is my favorite by far.


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Mrs Jil Manning 4 years ago from Sussex, England

hehe I'm going to show this to Mr Manning


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

LOL this is terrific.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

LOL thanks for always giving me those upturned smiles!


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

Love it. I'm still laughing.


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

This was funny :)


nardon 4 years ago

que divertido ey


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

Even more than 88668, all my limerick bear my signature.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Are her wishes coming true? Ha


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Can't say that the power of the wish didn't work.


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ndaffinee 4 years ago from Jumbled Brain, USA

This is hilarious! Your limericks always cheer me up! Keep 'em coming!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

so funny.. I want to learn to do this.. you do this so well. what are the rules?

Debbie


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

If you are interested in writing limericks, instructions are here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_(poetry)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

thank you so much..

Debbie


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Awesome! Funny! Genius! Thank you for the laugh! :)


Dorothy Saltel 2 years ago

I think that wife got her wish, this is cute.


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Ha!!Ha!! Boy did her wish work!!!

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