Making Love To My Poems

Making Love to my poems is

making memory that would last forever,

Come sit beside me let's make history

your words would be mined forever,

let me wipe away the tears

useless, tears of yesterday,

modern word activates the sound of your voice,

words of who are thou....

and thou shall... is dead and buried

who are you,

Where did you come from?

My shining star,

forgive my grammar, forgives my nouns

However, you can read between the lines,

lines so smooth,that shape the curves of my legs

your hand slipped between my thighs

and it became verbs

uncontrollable fingers nervously traces each pronoun

as I cried out "My God, "Oh my Lord,

come into me, come into me,

shed me from all the adjectives,

I felt the couplets of the words forming,

suddenly my train of thought turned "L'Allegro

a Haiku came together,

like burning desires to perform an illusion

of two tigers mating under the golden moon

Music, ecstasy, is what I felt as I clicked each key

I am blinded by your love,

You are too kind to me,

Yesterday's is dead,

Tomorrow is promise to no one

so there's nothing to fear,

yes words can hurt you,

when spoken out loud, like overused vowels,

as I make love to my poems:

like alliterationn here is my interpretation

only my eyes can see your beauty,

hiding your feeling from others is my legacy

to preserve you, let your warmth be a challenge

of my unspoken words as you orchestrated in my mine ...euphony

Duh-duh, duh, Duh, duh-Duh, duh, Duh, duh-duh

"How do I love thee let me count the ways. "Quote)

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

You really know how to write beautiful poems.up/awesome


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank you writer20, something that i noticed thoroughout my work i realise i writes better, when i am hurting...

thank you so much for commenting...


mikeq107 4 years ago

Beautiful ;0)

Very moving !!!!! from a true heart!!!

Mike :0)


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Mike my hubber friend, pain, work well for me

see some beauty in it... my pain, here I am hurting like hell. yet, it must to write, and purges myself of the pain, i hate this feeling, hate feeling so... unloved

only my words understand me....I must let my feet run, however not my heart . my eyes tell no lies...and my mind keep me going...


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author


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jeremiahjpwalton 4 years ago from New England

forgive my grammar, forgives my nouns is a great line. good work. check out my poetry at http://www.nostroviatowriting.com and give me feedback. thanks for your time and hub:)


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ladyjojo 4 years ago

Very nice

this styling was different i like it also the title.

Are those photos of you?

Have a bless day


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

jeremiahjp thank you so much for stoping by and showing some support (:0 yes i will check out your work shortly,

One love.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Ladyjojo thank you, I am the kind of person who likes to try out new style of writing, so I guess taking these Ginkgo biloba is working for me...(:)

thnk you so much for commenting. and yes that (me) the poet making love to her work.

One love Annie


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ladyjojo 4 years ago

okay i see ;) nice


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

Wow! So amazing and creative. I love the twisting and blending of words. Wonderful. Voted awesome and beautiful.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

i love a challenge and creativity,is my theme


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Good stuff and keep it going. You have my vote and following. Take care and good night.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A very creative and interesting poem.

It is strong feelings, pain, love, sorrow and happiness among others that make our writing whole. To write well we need to 'feel' and to feel we need to experience. So yes I understand when you say your pain makes you write well.

Voted up


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rambansal 4 years ago from India

Very creative and sweet words from a sweet heart..


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Welcome to my page, and thank you for reading my work

One love

Annie

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