Maybe not love at all .........verse

Pixated Google image .....:-}
Pixated Google image .....:-}

Maybe not rain coming at all but heat lightning
in some distant valley
Maybe not the dawn lighting the ends
of night .....
but a light left on in our back alley

Maybe not a melody at all but
untrained fingers teasing piano keys
Nor her moans at the rivers edge
but summer wind's making love to pine tree's

No maybe it wasn't love at all
but the senseless yearning
of untethered hearts
What ever that was though that filled our nights
and guided our days
I see still in the glow
of your ageless smile

Go ahead
call this thing love
Let's call it what ever we will
Whatever it is though that we do
let's never let it end
never let it end


8 comments

Beth37 2 years ago

Very beautiful.


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Ruchira 2 years ago from United States

beautiful indeed!


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chander mehra 2 years ago from Delhi

So good. Let it not end, the good things of life!

You are good, brother, but I am commenting as a quid pro quo. No body, but nobody, comments on my hubs even though the Hubpages Team repeatedly says "it could be Featured."

I was never told in advancethat five of my hubs were actually Featured.

Now, there's nearly-Featured one on my novel Soldiers of Allah. But not a single comment. I guess that we are all so self-glorifiers that nothing else matters.

BVut you are good, ahorseback. Keep it up!


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chander mehra 2 years ago from Delhi

So good. Let it not end, the good things of life!

You are good, brother, but I am commenting as a quid pro quo. No body, but nobody, comments on my hubs even though the Hubpages Team repeatedly says "it could be Featured."

I was never told in advancethat five of my hubs were actually Featured.

Now, there's nearly-Featured one on my novel Soldiers of Allah. But not a single comment. I guess that we are all so self-glorifiers that nothing else matters.

BVut you are good, ahorseback. Keep it up!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Very pleasing words of love or whatever you want to call it. Voted up.


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Jodah , Thank you kind sir !.......Ed


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Fennelseed 2 years ago from Australia

Maybe too much emphasis is put on love's raging fire and not enough on the glowing embers! Whatever it may be, your wind/tree lovemaking visual does it for me, hehe!! Just beautiful Ahorseback!


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ahorseback 2 years ago Author

Annie ! I believe that you are so right , Lets let the fire burn down a little and just feed the coals , Native Americans say that a small fire heats more ! And hey ! A small fire makes us sit a little closer !LOL , great to see you !.......Ed

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