Maybe I Should Write It On My Forehead (limerick)

It starts when she turns off the light

Then flames of her passion ignite

But when needs are met

One source of regret

I wish she would get my name right


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

what a bummer that would be. LOL


Ghaelach 3 years ago

Hi Martin.

Super.

You come up with another great limerick.

Works both ways as well.

UP and across the board, as it brought back a memory.

LOL Ghaelach


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Awesome my friend as always.Thanks so much for sharing.Turn off the light and turn on the desires but darkness always spoils good things. Spoilsport hehehe.Up.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Too funny!


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

What's in a name? the Bard once said,

It matters little once she's abed.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

oh, dear!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

OMG, What a turn off...


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99..or is it smatter76..or whatsthematter00..what's in a name ? Don't see this as a problem....honey,sweetie,babe, ma'm...men have been doing it for years...

hehehe loved it..gave me a chuckle...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

LOL It's always best to get the names straight.


Valleypoet 3 years ago

Ah well...at least she remembered your face!LOL:-))


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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Goo one! You have one unique and creative mind!


Cheryl Hollins 22 months ago

Martin are you published ? I need to have you in the house you are something serious

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