Meltdown

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dripping splashes
slushy mud
lumpy flow
like dragon's blood...
sloshy steps
that seep inside
shoes that try
their feet to hide.
icy tendrils
creep and flow
reminders of
cruel winter's woe.
breezes damp
with heavy mist...
sparing none
its painful kiss...
clings instead
to all who dare
the melting of
cold winter's fare.

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sameerk 5 years ago from India

nice one , loved it


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Excellent!

This brings back memories of springtime in Iowa.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

sameerk, thank you! Thanks for stopping by!

WillStarr, glad you like it! It's pretty drippy out there today!


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Nice. Very crisp. Dragon's blood always excites me. I wish some dragons would come and melt this endless winter!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

I hear that, Doug...we are all ready for a little spring, right about now! Thanks for stopping by and for your awesome comment!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Wonderful how you use nature to express your feeling deep inside. We can truly relate.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thanks, fossillady! Your comments bring spring to my heart!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh! I absolutely LOVE your intricate expressions here, Marsha, it is exquisite!

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