Melting Hearts

My pretty little demon Devouring thy soul body & mind

You’re the wingless angel gathering my broken piece.

You seem to be the soil In my love’s budding flowers.

I see us beyond the frightening tree’s Of loneliness

Your all the colers from crayons on my minds coloring page.

You are much better than the mornings first drink...

You give to me the only reason to sleep and breath.

As well you’re the blue lines between all my ink..

Thank you for finally finding and keeping me..

And closing my hearts safety pin violent yet gentlly.

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LilithMarie 6 years ago

Omai luv that is very beautiful and it reaches deeply into my heart!

~Your Marie


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

how cool - you are much better than the mornings drink

this really touched me and

way to go

it just gets better and better

thank you

Kimberly


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank You Very Much.


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

damn.

My hearts melting

and my tummy all mushy

not cool D.

Loved it

feel the rhythm in more than the obvious places

thank you

Kimberly


Ashley 6 years ago

This is pretty


Sapphire Fisher 6 years ago

David you really know how to touch a person don't you? Don't ever stop writting I loves ya!


poetlorraine 6 years ago

nice one, awful poet


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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

Hi Awful Poet, who is not Awful. My favorite line in this poem is -I see us beyond the frightening tree’s Of loneliness - because I can relate. I like all the other lines to. Thanks for sharing.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Good To Hear.


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Stephiliboo 5 years ago from Liverpool, United Kingdom

This is beautiful


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Awful Poet 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank you Steph~

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