Memory’s Tears (tanka)

Sweet memory’s tears

In the river of a life

The ebbs and the flows

Along the currents of time

Until they return at last

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Valleypoet 4 years ago

This flows , quite literally...nicely done buddy :-))

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Never heard of this form of poetry (tanka) but you pulled this off magnificently.

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travmaj 4 years ago from australia

I like your tanka very much - good work and beautiful words and imagery.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Your tanka is fantastic! I am getting the urge to write one. The picture is perfect..

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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

I've never heard of a tanka either, but this is beautiful!

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SiberianWolf 4 years ago from MidWest

beautiful... so much depth in this piece... and the photo is perfect

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teaches12345 4 years ago

Very deep and so true!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful and moving. Great pic.

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