Mess I Couldn’t Stomach (limerick)

So many-a young man has died

For things that I hold deep inside

Each night I would look

At mess freedom took

So lessons to cook right I tried

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ImKarn23 2 years ago

Yeah..i'm of the belief that a little structure never hurt anyone..(lol)

Good sunday morning M. You're in fine form, I seexx


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Perspycacious 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

For Sunday I thought you'd do better,

For the weather couldn't get any wetter.

While it held you inside,

And rhyming you tried,

More should come from a limerick pace setter.


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truthfornow 2 years ago from New Orleans, LA

At least you tried . . .


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Can't go wrong with a little bit of order.


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

A nice smile here Martin.

Graham.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Right off of the grill


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Perspycacious 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

should have read "our limerick pace setter."

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