Michelle (poem)

When morning came Michelle was gone

Another wish had kissed the dawn

Yet as we dreamed what worlds were drawn

Enough to build lost lifetimes on

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Each heartbeat sparked a fantasy

Was this how all was meant to be

Each footstep formed a memory

Of this and more she meant to me

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Within her smile all doubt was gone

An endless flow of what could be

Delight upon our memory

As kisses called to carry on

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Then darkness challenged fantasy

As yesterdays began to dawn

And in their wake such tears were drawn

Enough to draw Michelle from me

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And so before time carried on

A kinder world were curtains drawn

Where flowers’ dew awaked the dawn

When morning came Michelle was gone

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hi friend 4 years ago from India

Really love the poem.

Vote up


oceansider 4 years ago

Very beautiful!

Voted up!


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IsadorasThought 4 years ago

Keep the memories and the memories will keep you.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

mhatter, this is beautiful.. memories will be stored forever in our hearts.


Poetic Fool 4 years ago

mhatter, this is simply one of the most beautiful poems I have read on HP in some time. It is just pregnant with emotion and dreams and crushed hopes. Really, very well done, my friend. I've bookmarked this one so I can come back again. Kudos to you!


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Truly beautiful! Memories are there, ...... do we move on or hang onto the past?!


Dr Cil 4 years ago

Such beautiful words!


gottabegod 4 years ago

Up, awesome & beautiful! Such heart and emotion in each line! I love it!

God bless!


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wewillmake 4 years ago from kerala-INDIA

You are having the amazing ability to write.. I adore your work...


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Beautiful and melancholy are the words! Voted up and beautiful.


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slcockerham 4 years ago from Tallahassee, Florida

Beautiful are your memories of love in poetry.


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endless sea 4 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

Beautiful, very beautiful


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Absolutely gorgeous, Mhatter99...you really have a way with words...words which speak of a great love and respect...and a yearning which is palpable. very nice.


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G-Ma Johnson 4 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

Love has touched you...:O) Hugs G-Ma


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful poem and photo! Thank you for sharing this with us.


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Lady_E 4 years ago from London, UK

Aaawh... beautifully written.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

SO very well written. Your poem flows beautifully and is so loaded with imagery. Vote up!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Memories and regrets go hand in hand... beautifully written verse..

Vivid


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco Author

thank you. this is Martin verse - an original form


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Very, very nice piece, and done so eloquently.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. It's sad when we must part with someone. This was so wonderfully expressed. Passing it on.


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Houa Lor 4 years ago from Minnesota

Wow, ths is so honest and beautiful.


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mizjo 4 years ago from New York City, NY

Very beautiful and melancholy. Like the story of Guinevere and King Arthur. I wept for them. And I'm almost weeping for your bereft lover.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

As expected your poems are all class A. So refreshing ! Voted all !


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A B Duncan 4 years ago from Somewhere on the Stage

'Twas a beautiful poem and a fascinating rhyme structure. Well done!


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rjsadowski 4 years ago

You have a way with words. A beautiful poem.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Ok, I have to comment on this since my name's in the poem! One of your most beautiful poems, Hatter. Heartfelt and well emoted!


Lea Weikert 4 years ago

As the owner of this picture and also the person in it, I ask that you please credit me (copyright Lea Weikert) and also add a link to my profile page (redbubble.com/people/leasphotos) As a starving artist, I really need and deserve the credit! I'm sure you understand.

Sincerely,

Lea Weikert


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AudreyHowitt 2 years ago from California

Beautiful write!!


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cam8510 2 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

Well done, Martin. But how do you make sad sound so beautiful? I'm glad Audrey shared this.


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York

So beautiful and so sad. I see Cam is thinking along the same lines I am.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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