Mindful Clouds July 17, 2011

Fade away please...

Fade away...

Let the thoughts of us,

Just fade away...

Let the pain of loving thee...

Hide deep within me...

Behind the walls of my heart,

Let the new life of one begin,

Without having a thought of him...

Fade away thoughts...

Fade away...

Let me peace,

For the rest of the day...

For thoughts of him...

Only bring me pain...

Nothing for me to gain,

But agony...

Fade away thoughts...

Fade away...

Written by Jlono ©2011 

Comments 3 comments

JadedLove 5 years ago

Beautiful. Words and feelings alike. I know the painful side of love now and I must say if it wasn't for the pain, the smiles and laughter wouldn't mean as much to me. I am so into this. Great read and write. What a blessing you are to a fool such as me. Voted up and A,B

Johnny Love


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

@ Island Dreamer ~ *smile* Nope, None of my poems has ever been turned into a song... Yet! *laugh* But maybe we can work on that. *Smile from ear-to-ear* Thank you for a beautiful comment Island Dreamer.

Hope you're having a beautiful day!

Romancer~


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Island Dreamer 5 years ago from Hamiton, Ontario, Canada

Nice poem. Short and to the point. It reminds of the old Buddy Holly song titled Not Fade Away. The Rolling Stones also recorded it. This brings me to another point, have any of your beautiful poems been turned into a song?

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