Miss Ellie's night table drawer-Written in prose

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Letters from Charlie while serving in Vietnam.

Miss Ellie lying quietly across her bed, listens as her night table drawer appears to be whispering, " Go ahead Ellie open me once again

Peer inside at the memories nestled beneath the ivory cross stored away-back-when "

Inside the letters all neatly tied with a red, white and blue bow

Begging to be read once more, like so many moons ago

Letters from Charlie while serving in a place called Vietnam

Remember the day he was inducted to serve our country? Your emotions erupted. You were anything but calm

He proposed that day. You were unsure, so you said, " Let's wait the war will end soon, and I'll wait for you. Our time will come "

The unforgettable day you waved good-bye at the train station was the last time you would see him. A memory you've been unable to escape from

Letters sent back and forth, each reminded you how much you loved and missed him from afar

That's when you began making plans to be his wife when he returned safely after the war

It was not to be. He died in battle in a place called Saigon on the Ho Chi Minh City shore

Your time with Charlie ended as you cried, " Oh Charlie I wanted so very much more "

Somehow you never met anyone who could ever take his place in your heart

You've lived on memories and old faded letters Miss Ellie. Now close your eye's and peacefully sleep, knowing fully well your letters are safe in your night table's enclosed hidden space and from there they will never ever depart.

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cam8510 21 months ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

The love of a lifetime, it would seem. War does that to people, doesn't it? War was a bad idea from the beginning. Thanks for the beautiful writing once again, Ruby.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Cam. This is a story I heard at a Vietnam reunion years ago. I just added a touch of fiction to make it more romantic. I'm happy that you enjoyed. Thank you for coming by...


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pstraubie48 21 months ago from sunny Florida

Poignant and so sweetly shared...the bittersweet memory.

How many young women sadly have the same letters stashed neatly away for another day.

Voted up++++ shared

Angels are on the way to you this evening ps


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tillsontitan 21 months ago from New York

I've heard stories similar to this. How sad the waiting goes on forever. Beautifully written, each line bringing us closer to poor Ellie's sadness. You make us feel her emotions.

Voted up, awesome, and, beautiful.


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mary615 21 months ago from Florida

My first love served in the Army, and was statoned in Germany. He wrote me many letters which I still have after all these years. He is now happily married to someone else, but I'll always remember him.

Beautiful sentiment in your prose poetry, Voted UP, etc.


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annart 21 months ago from SW England

What a beautiful story from a refreshingly different angle, the drawer.

It was gentle and sad. How awful to lose a loved one in that way (or indeed any way); the waste of two lives.

It suits the style well; great job!

Ann


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Frank Atanacio 21 months ago from Shelton

a good little story .. always.. the fall of Saigon on the Ho Chi Minh City must have produced a lot of stories.. this one was very well written.. bless you


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bravewarrior 21 months ago from Central Florida

Ruby, this is so sad. I don't think the pain of lost love would have been any easier to bear if Ellie had married her man before he headed off for Vietnam.

I love the stories you tell with prose poetry.


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Jodah 21 months ago from Queensland Australia

A very romantic but sad story Ruby. The keeping of old letters hold so many memories...what will it be like in the future with letters now a dying art? No one will be able to open a drawer and take out an old love letter etc...it's all email now...far less romantic.


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billybuc 21 months ago from Olympia, WA

This is fiction rooted in a whole lot of reality. I am tired of war, and sad that real life stories like this one have to happen. Beautiful work, my friend. Your heart is as big as your talent.....well, considerably bigger, but you understand.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Patricia. I can imagine many young women with letters such as these. So many wars. So many lost loves. Thank you for coming and sharing...


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mary. So glad you could feel her emotions. Thank you for telling me.


DJ Anderson 21 months ago

Ruby, girl, you are learning to get to people's hearts and bore your

way right through to their souls. Some one once said, 'You can only write about places you have been.' Do you write about Miss Ellie or possibility someone much closer to home? What ever the case may be,

you are touching people right where they understand pain and sorrow.

You are forever pulling a new trick right out of your hat! And, you keep the crowds clamoring for more!

Ruby, you should feel really proud of your works. Your growth has been phenomenal!! And, yes, we want MORE!!!

DJ.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mary. I am so glad you told me about your first love. I think this must have happened to many, ( And you still have the letters, wonderful! ) Thank you for an awesome comment..


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Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

Wonderful story. A joy to read.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Ann. A comment like yours, and coming from a gifted writer as you, makes me a happy camper. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much..


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Frank. A time of war is a turning point for many, and yes the battle of Saigon must have been bad. Thank you for the well written comment..


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Shauna. I agree losing a husband would be just as bad if not worse. I'm so glad you like my storie's. Thank you for telling me....


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello John. I miss getting letters and writing letters too, and you're correct, soon only the computer will have our written words, kinda sad. Thank you for coming to read my piece...


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Bill. I think I understand. lol..Thank's for reading and commenting....


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello DJ. Your comment BLOWS me away. I am totally thrilled that you enjoy my writing. This is not about me. I used to go to the Vietnam vet. reunion every year for about ten years. While there I heard so many stories, this is one told by a woman, of course I added to it to make a romantic story. All the war stories I write about are true with added content to make them rhyme. I love to rhyme. It is difficult to write without rhyming, but I'm learning as I go. Bill said to read-read-read to become a better writer and that's what I do. I dearly love to write. Your comment humbles me. Thank you so much. You made my day. Hugs..


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Larry. I am so glad you find joy in reading my storie's. Thank you so much..


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manatita44 21 months ago from london

The despair of war, and of us left with our memories, pride, gratitude and sometimes broken dreams ... and human loss or tragedy.

Woven through some letters or drawers and crafted well. Peace, Ruby.


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mckbirdbks 21 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Hello Ruby. Yes, this is a common tradgedy in those sad, sad days . Great song choice of course it would be Elvis.


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clivewilliams 21 months ago from Nibiru

Gone to war, many will not return, sometimes all we have are really letters and memories. Touching piece.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello manatita. Yes, war robs many people of love and family. Thank you for the well crafted comment..


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mike. I know you served in Vietnam as a young marine. Thank you..Yes my man Elvis served in Germany. We groupie's had to wait for his return.lol


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Clive. I didn't have a loved one in the Vietnam war but I had friends who did. It was an uneasy time in our history. Thank you for coming by.


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Faith Reaper 21 months ago from southern USA

Beautiful and poignant at the same time. Ruby, I love your creativeness in writing this one from the perspective of the drawer. I always have kept every letter I have ever received, but sadly, the days of writing letters are gone ... I am glad I save mine now, especially! Maybe my great grandchildren will see them one day and ponder why we did such.

Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

Peace and blessings always


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Theresa. Always happy to see you. I have old letters I've kept too. I found a letter I wrote to my sister Bea when I was just sixteen. It was among her pictures and keepsakes. I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. Thank you much.

Peace and blessings..


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tobusiness 21 months ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

War takes so very much, but as long as we have those precious memories love will always survive in the human heart. Sad, poignant and beautifully done.


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always exploring 21 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Jo. Always so good to see you. I agree. Memories are forever. Thank you for the beautiful comment...


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Genna East 21 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

War has many victims; true love that is so tragically stolen, and unlived, is one. I had tears when I read this. Yet Ellie will always know that she loved, and was loved. We grieve for Ellie in what was lost, yet are comforted that she has memories which can never be taken from her. Beautifully written, Ruby. :-)


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marcoujor 20 months ago from Jeffersonville PA

Profoundly sad, yet a reminder of the constancy of unconditional love.

Beautiful work, my dear Ruby - from deep in your heart, as always.


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always exploring 20 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Genna, I'm so sorry for being late. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Memories, what would we do without them? Hugs.....


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always exploring 20 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mar, so glad to see you. It's a story many can relate to so I'm told. Thank you for the beautiful comment..Hugs.....


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Frida Rose 19 months ago from Maryland

What a beautiful and sad story. . . You made it easy to imagine Ellie's pain.


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always exploring 18 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Frida Rose. So sorry I'm late. I've been moving and redecorating, so busy! Your comment is beautiful. Thank you so much...


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drbj 18 months ago from south Florida

What an accurate, bittersweet portrait you painted, Ruby, with this remarkable bit of writing. And your choice of Elvis singing 'Love Letters' was the perfect accompaniment.

Thanks you, m'luv.


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello drbj. I can't believe I missed your comment. Please excuse me. I am happy that you liked this piece and my man Elvis. Thank you so much..

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    I am a writer of poetry and fiction. I especially love flash fiction. My name is Ruby, and I live in Southern Illinois. I am a retired R.N.



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