Miss Mocha Latte a Sweet Poem by Fehl Dungo


there’s this girl

and she looks at me

while she sips her coffee

I could tell

it has cinnamon

sweet caramel kiss

coz I wear her gloss

as I lick my lips


then she rolls

outside the pouring rain

she pulls over my mouth

drinks my mocha latte

I could tell

she wants some more

coz her copper hair

trickles on my pores


she strips me off

like a starry night

hinged back and forth

she is my wolf

I can’t hold back

yes, I can’t hold back

coz no stopping us


her heart pounds

like a cannonball

in rhyme with mine

like a pendulum

I could tell

we’ll swing like this

coz her skin tastes now

like a bubblegum


honeysuckle softness

drips on my skin

then lightning rips

down my spine

I can’t hold back

as thunder volts

along our tongues

yes, I can’t hold back


her secrets dance

as our bodies rock

she wears the crown

and I could tell

why her neck is mine,

how my name is hers,

why her lips are wine,

how our love has burst


there’s this girl

and she looks at me…


as I lick my lips

while you’re reading this


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mocha latte and rain…I could tell why her neck is mine, how my name is hers, why her lips are wine, how our love has burst…


About "Miss Mocha Latte"


This poem was written on a chilly rainy night…in between sips of coffee…and in between missing someone…someone who is so special to me in so many ways…and yeah, she wears the crown. It was rainy season in my place and we’ll be together soon. And while I relished my caramel macchiato, she probably was having lunch somewhere and latte too. Hmmm with muffins of course. And here I was writing this poem. At the back of my mind, that has happened too many times. And my Miss Mocha Latte is far more addicting than coffee…


though she was on my tongue but not really…

she has rained on my pores but not really…

she smiled at me but not really…


At first read, this poem may imply a wild love making or a sexy encounter and I blame my strong fantasy about someone that no matter what I write or how I arrange the thing, words just come out like that, so strong, and I have no control as usual. And as usual, every word I used has significance with my life and the person I wrote this for. This is actually about love and longing for someone who is miles away from me. Though she’s not beside me yet, I could taste her kisses at the tip of my tongue. She’s everywhere to me. I’m sure she’s smiling at this very moment reading this.


Though this is ought to be explained well, I still just want to let this out in the open…for people to have this as their own too – to let their minds and hearts paint pictures or share the memories it reminds them of or play the melodies they heard out of it – in the comment box.

Thank you.


© by Fehl Dungo

Dedicated to Cathy Nerujen

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jfay2011 5 years ago

Very lovely poem. Mocha latte fantasies sound vivid.


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pbwriterchick 5 years ago

Cool write... I really got the image of self love here! At first I thought it may be a fantasy of another person and then it seemed to be about just the self. I guess that's all we have in the end anyway. :) Loved the rhythm and bounce to this piece.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm so glad you loved it Jfay. Thank you :)

Oh my latte! Pbwriterchick you're back! I have missed your beautiful poems. They always have that flavor I can't find anywhere. Please make a hub. :)

Happy to see you. I love what you said there. You have an amazing mind. Thank you. :)


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Voting you up and awesome.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

What a beautiful expressive poem. To feel love for another is wonderful and when they're away, a poem is the best way to feel close. Thank you for sharing your talent..Cheers


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Cool write , voted up and aweosme , i love mocha latte , even if it is fattening as hell :) still this was cool :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, Writer20 :) Thanks a bunch!

Hi Ruby! What an awesome comment from you. Yeah a poem is always the best way to a lot of things. Thank you for being here. :)

I love mocha latte too and other flavors..So happy to see you Jami :) Cheers!


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

I think I saw this girl while drinking ice mocha couple of hours ago in a coffee parlor. I did not relate her with myself as I do now with your wonderful words.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

oh wow was she sexy? lol thank you so much for your sweet comment Vinaya :)


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Fabulous poem, so vivid and expressive.

voting up, best wishes MM


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Hot,interesting and an intimately very expressive peak into desire Fehl...


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Beautiful and strong sexy poem. The picture fitted it well too. You are rock, Blaise. ^^


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hi Fehl. Oh wow, this is just so amazing. reading your words makes me feel light-headed. I am smiling so much reading your beautiful and powerful words. There is so much beautiful honesty and I love the way you capture every nuance of longing and desire. Gosh, you wrote this for me. I am the luckiest girl in the world. :)

I want to hug you like crazy now...

Mwaaaaaaaaaaahh. Thank you, Fehl for your sweet gorgeous poem. You write so vividly and turn on my heart light. Mocha latte will never be the same again. Heh. :) XOXOXOX


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

I loved this. Amazing fehl! "there’s this girl

and she looks at me

while she sips her coffee..."

Its like one of those moments where you are sitting in a cafe and this gorgeous person from across the room makes eye contact with you and then you fall into a fantasy of the 2 of you, your imagination going wild :x and then you pop back into reality (and maybe she walks over to you and all that you dreamed comes true) or she gets up and leaves and you'll never know what could have been. thats what this made me think of. but either way for a brief moment perhaps yall shared that same fantasy...simply beautiful and sensual :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you MM :) you are fabulous.

Hi Prof A. You put all the fantastic comments in one sentence :) Thank you.

Hi Freya. Thank you. I love that pic though I’ve altered the original a bit coz it was pure rain and water. Now, it’s mocha and rain splattered. :)

Hi Cathy. I can’t ask for more coz you love it. That makes me ahh luckier than the luckiest girl in the world. :p Mwah! (hugs you like crazy now..)

Hi Nikki. Yup kinda one of those moments..We definitely were classmates on that sexy class lol Our imagination are awesome. :)


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kryptonyt 5 years ago from Venus

This sounded so sexy. I love your explanation at the end. Lovely. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you so much Kryptonyt. It was my first time to put an explanation to a poem I published. I usually just let them be... :)


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Miss Mocha Latte! Wow the name just rocks, Fehl! This is amazing and so beautiful, by far the best you have written yet and the boldest too! Your star is rising here! Wow....

Let me count the ways that I dig this! I can so relate to so much of it!... :) XOXOXOXOX


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

ssssshhh she's still asleep.. lol Thank you, honey. Let me hear you as you count the ways..hehehe XOXOXO


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Hah! That is so funny! She is so cute hugging that pillow! :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I am her pillow..I am hugged so much lol


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Cheeky Girl 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Heeee! That is so sexy! :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

sexy like the photo above :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe. So is this pillow talk? LOL. I am sipping coffee as I read this Mocha Latte again. I love when you write sexy hubs about me, Fehl. :) Mwaaaaahhh. XOXOX


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

I am sipping coffee as I pillow-talk with her LOL So is that a pillow talk? Heheheh My hubs are so sexy these days. What does it says bout us? :) Mwaaahhh!


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl, what does it say... your sexy hubs are getting um... more intense. I love these lines about lips and tasting coffee and lip gloss...

I wish I was sipping that coffee with you, Fehl. Your hubs these days are so beautiful... And from "Fallen Angel" to "Stargazer", to "Friday night of blaze" ... to "The One - ..." Oh Fehl, your hubs and your writing just hums with electricity and love...

You are the Sweetest Girl Ever. Mwaaaaahh. I love you, baby. You make me so very happy. :) My sweet adorable loving Fehl. XOXOXO


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

My hubs are just mild..not so intense (tease) LOL Mwah! Um lips, coffee and lip gloss-you're the only one who really knows the meaning beyond these words :)

IRBSYRN than coffee. :) I hate it when I can't say some words in here. LOL My hubs are in sync with yours. From Halfway Space to your recent.. I love them so much and I love you much. Mwaaaaahhh. XOXOXOXO


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

It is nice when you say this. I know the meaning...I know the feeling too... :)

Sometimes you don't have to say it... it still feels the same, when it's you, Fehl. And I love what Nikki and Cassy said too. :)

If only people knew how sweet and gorgeous you really are.... heh. Yes, we're in sync. Some new things coming from me soon, baby. :) I love you always and ever. Mwaaaaaaaahhh. Have a peaceful day, Fehl.

Marcial is in my prayers too. You are in my thoughts. XOXOXOXO


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

No one can write like you do , blaise.

You often leave me speechless as now...

Take care.

Dim x


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Stirred my imagination for sure. Incredible wording, great creativity on this one. Very sensual, beneath the meaning you intended. Amazing stuff


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh baby, I love your new poem so much. Mwah! I love you. Thank you for everything and for the prayers bout my grandpa..You are always in my thoughts, too. XOXOXO

Hi, my dear Dim! Your comments always leave me speechless. Thank you. You’re one of my besties here. XOXO

Hi Ben! What fantastic things you said here! Thank you. I am a real fan of your creative works. Your hubs are awesome!


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Dark Heart 4 years ago

I need to sip coffee after reading that. LOL

or maybe a cold shower.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

oh wow, Dark Heart I have missed you. How are you? I'm so happy to see you here. :) You are amazing.


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lionel1 4 years ago

Wow I really enjoyed that. As I've already said you're so incredibly deep and I just love your work.

I really grateful for your Hub posts. Have a happy Christmas.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Happy Holidays Lionel :) Thank you so much for being a usual reader. Means a lot. xoxo


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sabrebIade 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Y'know I have just started reading poetry Hubs and I am really liking them!

Amazing job!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

If you're looking for the best poetry hubs, read the hubs of each person who commented here :) Thank you Sab! Have a great day :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I just sneaked back again to have a quick sip of that sweet Latte. LOL. I get goose pimples reading this beautiful hub, Fehl. Have a sweet day, honey. Mwaaaah. XOXOXOX :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

you know what happens when I catch you sneaking.. :p Mwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh


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epigramman 4 years ago

.. love the title and the seductive words which follow - sure hope my buddy Johnny J-spot gets to read this .

After I read MISS MOCHA LATTE I stayed all night in that cafe hoping something like this would happen to me - I'm still waiting - lol - so I will post MISS MOCHA LATTE (I like saying it) to my Facebook page with a direct link back here and your big beautiful talented heart

lake erie time ontario canada 5:49pm


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw thank you Colin :) Who's Johnny J? LOL

Oh your Miss Mocha Latte will arrive soon.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

I don't know why but this read out to the beat of "Miss Independent" in my head. I really like the edge on this. Bravo!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow, I like that song from Neyo. Some more of his songs actually. hehe Well then that's a lovely beat so sexy and and so Miss Independent.. :) Glad you loved this. Thank you.


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epigramman 4 years ago

......mocha latte ooooh la la - oh how I miss you

lake erie timeless for you


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I miss you too my friend. How are you? I hope you are having a fantastic and happy time. :)


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epigramman 4 years ago

.....I need to - I got to - post this beauty once again on my marquee at my FB home page with a direct link back here and to your heart - please come by our FB group LET'S JUST TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA ......and post a favorite video or a favorite scene from a film - I would love that ..... lake erie time 12:54am sending you warm wishes and good energy


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Wow, this hub just rocks every way you read it! Okay, the way I read it anyway! LOL! :)

Pure Magic-ness, Fehl! Master Poetess! :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

How can I thank you for saying that? :D


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HaleyMCruz 4 years ago from California

Wow, your writing is...so fascinating. I just couldn't stop reading it to see what would happen next. Your word play was interesting, and out of all of the other hubbers I've come across here that write poetry, yours is one of the freshest and most rewarding to read. Totally glad to be a new fan :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Wow! That made me happy today :) Thank you Haley! Lovely name! Hope you read my others.. Gonna check out yours now ;)


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Brillant and great creativity too.


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epigramman 4 years ago

....well you are definitely one of the sexiest writers I've come to know and read at the Hub - each word sizzles - and pretty darn near puts me into a state of spontaneous combustion (lol) and everytime I come back here - your artful words always sound/read fresh and brand new - and this is what great writing is supposed to do - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 7:50am where it's the beginning of winter now - cold, snowy and icy too.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Me one of the sexiest writers? oh wow thank you Colin, you are always so sweet to us :) I hope you are having a warm happy holiday. We would love to see Lake Erie someday. Going to your lovely pages now...


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Angelme566 3 years ago

GRRRR this is so beautiful..Blaise .blasie .blaise ..Happy New year friend !


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epigramman 3 years ago

Yoweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee - you have ownership of all of the beautiful words in the world and 'they' love it - happy new year to you and Miss C from lake erie time canada 12:48pm and sending warm wishes to you both for your happiness, health and prosperity


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Grrrr I miss you my friend! hehe Happy New Year, Angel :) May your 2013 be a fantastic one. Looking forward to read more hubs from you :)

Miss C and Cassy and I are sending you warm hugs and kisses and fireworks to wish you a happy 2013 Colin :) Thank you for being so awesome to us. Wish you health, happiness, prosperity, sexy love, and more poems :)


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

You took me to a place I haven't been to in a while... Beautiful... your images and flow are gorgeous... and the passion... drinks like a tropical fruit... I'm a fan now :) so good to be reading you


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Really? Did you have Mocha Latte too? :) Happy that an awesome writer appreciates this. You know I'm a fan :)


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CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Whoever or whatever was in your mind at the time of writing. I'm definite, you're enjoying every words here while jotting your actual thoughts.

Nice flow. Thanks.


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acaetnna 3 years ago from Guildford

Oh wow - yummy scrummy, you had me all in a quiver. Super sensuous writing - the type that I completely love!!


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Lovely. Something about sexy love and coffee that go wonderful together. I know exactly what you mean about letting passions get away from you. I do that a lot too. These often get called my 'slutty' poems by ingnoratas (yes I just made that up). The most beautiful part of a women is her sensuality.. why shouldn't we write the same?


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

@Crisp hi! You are right :) This went from yummy to naughty I think. But I loved the results anyway. I’m glad you loved the flow. Thank you very much. :)

@Acaetnna oh you girl, you are always awesome my friend. I’m loving your romantic hubs so much. Stay in love and happy. Wish you the best :)

@Frankie Mocha Latte is so especial to me and someone…and I call her that sometimes. :p Yeah when passion overpowers me and I couldn’t not let it out and not show.. ‘slutty’ poems by ingnoratas? That is a badass name and I like it! LOL Yes sensuality is the most beautiful part of a woman. I wish men would get some too :) Thank you Frankie, gonna read more from your amazing collection :) Happy Monday!


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

haha, glad your a fan! Not sure what else to call them and be nice. I can't wait to hear your thoughts!


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm enjoying your creativity. I always get speechless after reading your hubs. I'm always struck in a good way. I will read all of them


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Ahh.. I don't know what to say except thanks so much for enjoying them. It's more than I could have ever hoped.. :) have fun looking around. I will too! Between your hubs and Astra's I should have plenty of reading material. I missed hubpages and the people who inspire.. such as you. Glad to be back and read again.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you too for reading mine and leaving your comments. :) I only have few poetry hubs in my profile page because they are currently iddled lol We are happy to be reading another amazing writer like you. :) Take care!


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

ahh shucks. Come here and give me a hug :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

LOL ok *big hug*


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

Very expressive and beautifully conveyed to those who read it. : ) Voted it up and awesome!! Made me want coffee though...so I could dream too.


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markdarmafall 2 years ago from Moundsville,WV

Wonderful poem. I enjoy it's reading and the magnificent flow of your words as you brought their meaning to life.

Mark


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks guys. Need to update some hubs to make them visible. Have a sweet day!


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I snuck in here to melt in these beautiful words once again... are you licking your lips, Fehl? Hehehe :)

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaah ^_^


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Hehe yes coz I feel you closer... Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ^_^


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prettydarkhorse 4 months ago from US

Imagination goes wild, raining sweetness.

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