Molten Silver Mist

Molten silver mist sent horizontally through the trees
Brightest, tenderness green; a slant of sun tangled in
Shouting of the water; powerful and incessant
Flow secretly and irresistible among the wet rocks
Hiss, splash, gurgles...
Rainbow sprays beautifully; purity absolute

Unearthly, rich, and drizzling; strange
Effect in lights and shades
Endless foliage has little miracle
Each leaves and branched bestowed
In ways unknown to any hours
Splendid and pleased; mother nature beauty

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shamela 5 years ago

Hi chanroth,

Your poem is beautiful.

I voted your poem beautiful.

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Ghaelach 5 years ago

Morning Chanroth.

A beautiful poem.

LOL Ghaelach

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LadyFiddler 5 years ago from Somewhere in the West

Very nice Excerpt

Have a lovely week ;)

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europewalker 5 years ago

Lovely expressive poem:)

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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Beautiful poem and photos. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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ImKarn23 5 years ago

pretty poem - stunning photos! Breathtaking!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Nicely done! Love those pics.

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Deborah Brooks 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

a beautiful soothing poem.. so divine.

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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

your poetry is a visual delight, stunning the senses and gurgling through in a cascade of words like a mountain stream. love it! beautiful.

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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello everyone, thank you very much for reading, commenting, and voting. Your comment means a whole lot to me! Thank you!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Your words flow beautifully in this poem. I really enjoyed this. The mist and the forest comes alive in your words. I love the images too.

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