Moment Of Truth (limerick)

My friends threw a bachelor’s spree

They even hired striper for me

To drinks I did fly

As truth caught my eye

The stripper was my bride to be

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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

No way you can get in trouble with that scenario. :)

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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Oopsy Daisy! ... not for you... Daisy's a dirty bird!!!


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

So. . .should you get mad at her instead? Wait...mad for setting a trap...or mad for being the trap that everyone else sees as well?

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

hahaha surprise, surprise!

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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Oooo. Ha ha ha. Now that's a bachelor party for the books. Can you imagine? Very funny, Mhatter99. The expression on his face says it all. Voted up and funny.

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Valleypoet 3 years ago

And just the day after she stumbled upon him as a male stripper, on her hen night....great picture, thanks Martin:-))

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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

This is fantastic.

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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

What a surprise!Your friends are very generous lol

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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

Oh no! So very funny! Thanks for sharing!

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Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

Hilarious! That's actually an awesome idea! Lol!

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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

That groom to be is really in luck,

His bride to be knows how to earn a buck.

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Funny one..Surprise..surprise!

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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I actually heard Gomer Pyle's voice saying, "Sur-prise, Sur-prise!"

Don't know where that came from.

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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

What a dilemma - is the wedding still a go-er I wonder!

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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Oh, haha. Good one!

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PHILLYDREAMER 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Lucky guy. LOL

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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

I love this! It made me laugh out loud. Yes, what a lucky guy!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Good one!

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

What an interesting turn of events...

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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

That's a good one!

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