Moments Across The Sky (poem)

Those golden moments spread across the sky

Those lasting looks then shared by you and I

Forever’s wonders world could not deny

Forever had to wait for our goodbye

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Each kiss would spark another dream come true

We shared a fairytale then known by few

We peered out windows rainbows would shine through

Each beat of a heart the other felt too

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We were the music raining from the sky

Whose days brought delight and tears but a few

And time had no meaning until we were through

Not even a wish would whisper goodbye

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But meaning of life its fate must come true

There was no exception for you and I

Those shadows in mirrors will not deny

Each pleasure and pain the other felt too

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Then came the moment of the kiss goodbye

The love story’s end which tears can’t deny

Forever still wonders for you and I

In golden moments spread across the sky

Comments 15 comments

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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

I didn't want this love story to end! This is the kind of love that you are not envious of, but simply appreciated and admired. This swept me away. Beautiful!!!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

True love never dies, but really does live on for eternity! Very beautiful.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

This is especially beautiful. The photo is wonderful. You really know how to write these romantic poems - just wonderful.


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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

So beautiful!

"a Fairytale then known by a few...."

That is so much my favorite part!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

What a sweet tale of love and the sharing of life. I enjoyed this, Martin. The video at the end is very soothing.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

A deeply sad love story. Why must it be---the harder we love---the more

pain we feel?

A beautiful write, Martin.

DJ.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Beautiful work Martin.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is one more of your best Martin..Beautiful!!!!!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Ah, my kind of poem! I love it. Sorry I haven't been around, will try to catch up, been on jury duty.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A romantic and most beautiful poem with a lovely photo


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Brilliant as always Martin.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Sometimes this happens, and you expressed it so perfectly.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Such romantic and wonderful thoughts. Passing this on.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh so beautiful Martin.

Eddy.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

So nice, keep on writing. Thank you.

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