Moments Made (poem)

They met amid the splendor of a past

A dream perhaps or maybe so much more

A scent of something they had lost before

From here the timeless seemed to go too fast

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Within their eyes were passions which they wore

From fantasies the couple wandered past

The moments made in magic kisses cast

The moments made for ever to restore

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But now a dream which dances in the mist

The moments made is now stage left bare

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In minds of many lovers are dismissed

As moments life begins to slowly wear

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They met in dream which ever will persist

The moments made when jasmine scents the air

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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

this is awesome ..Martin ..


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

The music was the perfect compliment for this beautiful piece.

'From here the timeless seemed to go too fast' ~ I love this!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Jasmine blooms in the spring when love is found and displayed with the splendor of life. Beautiful sentiment, Martin.


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks my friend for this awesome read, loved the video to !


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MarleneB 3 years ago from Northern California, USA

Beautiful poem and beautiful accompaniment. I really enjoy the sound of saxophones.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

The romance of your poem intertwined with the memory of the scent of jasmine is so lovely. Enjoyed reading very much.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very lovely indeed, Mh! I love the scent of jasmine and I could almost smell its intoxicating smell while reading your beautiful words.

Love the sax and amazing video, which add that je ne sais quoi!

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless,

Faith Reaper


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Love your poem, also love the scent of jasmine...Thank you...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Magically wonderful. Love jasmines. Passing this on.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Wonderful Martin ; a great share.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Jasmine seems to connect the land of dreams...


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

This is a really wonderful poem.

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