Moon Take Me Back (poem)

Oh moon beyond tomorrow in her eyes

Take me back to linger softly midst those days

A fragrance so familiar filled the air

And hearts were flushed by touch of satin veil


Each mist

A drift

A wish



The promises

Unshaken now

The timeless now

Each sigh-filled now


Oh moon if your heart still beats

As when those promises were etched

Into souls

Cast in time

To a place

Take me back


In her eyes was everything

Searching for dreams to born

Into days

Beyond this


Take me back


Beyond tomorrow till now

When those unshaken promises were made

To live amid the air of always

Sailing through a sea of always

With every star a kiss of always

Take me back

To where I am

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

One can't hide their feelings the eyes is open to all feelings

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, I love that "Oh moon beyond tomorrow in her eyes" ...

Up and more and sharing

Blessings, Faith Reaper

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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

a definite up and share

Great job!


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DJ Anderson 3 years ago

A sensuous work filled with passion and longing.

Another winner.

You do give us your best every day.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I like the rhythm in this one, Martin. It gets the heart racing then slows down to a peaceful place.

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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Wonderful poetry. Jamie

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Michele Travis 3 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Another wonderful poem. Love it!

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A lovely poem: from eternity to eternity.

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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Beautiful, great poem.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Once again so beautiul;voted up ,


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing and beautiful.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I adore the thankfulness in your words...

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teaches12345 3 years ago

Ah, such a beautiful poem. I also love the music video as it sets the mood for this poetry.

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