Morning Drive

The morning drive

How I loved

From Addison to Clark

As the sun was rising

Lucky twenty-five

Rays pouring in from outside

And the dewy smell that

Lingered in the air

My love was bursting for you then

Each morning that I had to leave

I felt so sweetly loved by you

My iced coffee tasted sweeter

Knowing I can talk to you later

I loved those nights together

Hating how I had to leave

Wishing I could stay with you in bed forever

Remember how you loved my smell on your pillow

And the lazy days talking on the phone in bed

Whenever I think of you I think of those mornings

And the sun that beamed overhead


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Your true colors are now easily shining through.

This is so beautiful Caroline.

Short and very sweet, from the heart, I can see this is so many beautiful places.

Bless.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Sky thank you for the compliment. I guess we are our true selves when we are most loving and pure. :)


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

That's as correct as one can get and "that" is the hardest to find because, have you ever met someone who told you up front , Miss : I am a liar, or whatever this we must waste the already short allot ed time given to us to find out 10 years later. See!

Stay true to yourself.

Bless.


Ghaelach 5 years ago

Once again Caroline we meet in cyber space.

The sun's rays are certainly shining through this love story.

Voted UP and beautiful.

LOL Ghaelach


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G Miah 5 years ago from Muslim Nation

Very nice Caroline! Enjoyed it very much and loved it!

Voted up!


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YogaKat 5 years ago from Oahu Hawaii

A wonderful poem!


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Sky lol you are right. It is rare we find someone who tells us the truth of who they are if they're a liar. Thank you for stopping by. You're comments mean a lot to me. :)


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Ghaelach thank you for your wonderful compliment.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

G Miah Thank you for reading and voting!


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Yogakat thank you for stopping by and reading!


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

This was so great and you make my morning so beautiful. Thanks for writing and share with us. Rated up. Have a nice weekend!


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Prasetio thank you for reading and your nice compliment! I'm glad it made your morning better.


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

c21,

Morning drive..I remember the old days of fighting traffic I dont drink coffee at all I used to go to work with soda or water interesting take on the morning drive.

TH


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom- I can't seem to live without coffee. It gives me the needed boost to get through my day. lol Yes, sometimes mornings can even be romantic. Thanks for reading and your comments. :)

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