Music - Haiku

Can you feel the heat

Of the percussional beat

Sweeps you off your feet


Feel the sound deep down

A fun night out on the town

Acting like a clown


Feeling like a loon

All genre tunes make me swoon

Even way past noon


© 2012 Esmah

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joanveronica 4 years ago from Concepcion, Chile

Hi, Esmah, I really like the flow of these words! I voted up, and I think you could maybe expand the idea of Haiku in another Hub?


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Esmah 4 years ago from Haikuville Author

Thank you joanveronica, I will take you up on your suggestion.

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