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Beauty And Uniqueness in All Things

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“Hello, my Friend, a voice did say,

Once more let's wash your dirt away.”

Amazed, I turned, and looked ahead,

“I’m in your hand, my bath soap said.”


“Your speak, sweet one, I dared to say,

Even as we caress today.

Your lather cleanses all my pores,

Sweet fragrances linger on my toes.

In private places, foreign lands,

You reach cute areas with my hands!”


“Too true, old buddy, trusted Friend,

Your delicate skin I soothe and tend,

Give loveable smells to sacred parts,

The limbs, behind and other sorts.”


“Thank you, my aromatic mate,

All odour gone, such perfumed state,

Hygienic body clean and fresh,

Now vanished all the office stress.”


“Ho, ho, my bath soap said again,

Me not for granted take, disdain,

When I’m not used as you have known,

In buses, trains and crowded zones?


My nemesis lingers faithfully,

Why should you thus embarrass me?

So scrub away, let's not be mean,

I'll do my best, to keep you clean.

-Manatita 1st April, 2014.

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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

Believe it or not, I have been waiting for an Ode to the Bar of Soap. Well done! Jamie


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thanks Jamie.

You're quick! I also have been wanting to write it for some time.


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

Too cute! We can depend on you to see and share the beauty in bar soap and in everything else. Well done!


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thank you, my Sweet.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

So well written and such fun! Thank you for the smile today.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Loved it, too cute and very clever!


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Blossom B: Cool, my Sweet Sister B,

Happy to make you smile.

Always Exploring: I tried. Thank you so much, my Friend.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

This is really interesting and clever.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Hope to please.

Thought I'd be a different. Thanks a million!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Absolutely delightful.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Hey there my Sweet One.

Thought I'd do a cute one. Thanks for the loving comment.


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Nellieanna 2 years ago from TEXAS

What an appealing aria sung with your bar of soap! But what more pure voice than its? haha.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thanks my Cute Friend.

My area of choice is the esoteric and sublime. But I recite in public and sometimes I am aware of the need for variety. So I do an occasional 'lite' one. My audience laughed a lot when they heard this one. Glad you liked it. Much gratitude.


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aviannovice 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Excellent work! This brought a smile to my face for the entertainment value. Well done.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Me too, Sweet Avian.

Glad you liked it. A lite one, this. Om Shanti!


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crazybeanrider 2 years ago from Washington MI

This put me in a very good mood!


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

Thank you so much. makes people laugh, that one. wanted to do an 'easy' funny one. Joy and peace.


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Monis Mas 2 years ago

Too cute and funny! Very creative.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

I do a funny one from time to time. Thanks. Monis.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

I saw this again on Audrey's toilet poem, came back to read again. Still funny..What a hoot!


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manatita44 2 years ago from london Author

I was trying to tell her I did something similar and to visit. Seems like you got here before her. You're so nice to me Ruby. May the Mother send lots of blessings your way. Om Shanti!


Jalen 20 months ago

No cominaplts on this end, simply a good piece.


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manatita44 17 months ago from london Author

Thanks Jalen. Appreciations.

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