My Body Has No Eyes

My body has no eyes

My room has no windows

No breath, No vision

Bleeding this open incision


When will it change?

When will I grow?

I cannot take it anymore

I can’t find a new life door


Fine just yesterday

Fine the day before

Back in and what do you know

I was just a puppet in your show


Running and running

Walls after walls

I can’t find my light

I have lost all my sight


I hear a voice calling

I hear a voice say

Come to me my child

I opened my eyes and smiled


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Comments 33 comments

5 years ago

Interesing poem!

So whose voice is this...?


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you and the voice is my creater calling to take me by my hand!!

bella


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Woah, the picture freaked me out a little.

Fiercely written.


5 years ago

Ty. I thought so! Your message is, we need to be reconciled to our God, right?

Blessings.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Qud, I am sorry for that didn't mean to. thanks for the comment as always you are simply the best.

F., Yes that is exactly it. We astray and take different paths everyday isn't that the woes of life that we can make our own decisions to live and make the wrong decisions to learn?


sariasam 5 years ago

Wow...the title is superb & attractive.

http://stores.ebay.com/Shears-and-Scissors


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you very much!!

bella


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Tom Cornett 5 years ago from Ohio

Wonderful work! Made me feel...and...smile. :)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you T.C. I am happy you enjoyed it!!

smiles :)

bella


leann2800 5 years ago

...wow!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Leann, is this wow good or bad kinda nervous?? lol Thanks for reading either way

bella


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b. Malin 5 years ago

What a Wonderful line Bella, "I was just a Puppet in your show". Maybe we all are to a degree. The picture is a 1,000 words. Wow, on this one and a Vote UP!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

B., Thank you we all aren't we at some point or another :)

thanks B.,

bella


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

Beautiful! I think at least once, we have all felt this lost. You really touched a part of me that I was dealing with at one time in my life. Amazing imagery and feeling!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Mamadrama, Thank you. I have visited this place a few times you would think I would have learned... thanks for stopping by!

smiles :)

bella


bellataylor 5 years ago

WoW! Really great ;)


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Bellataylor I kinda have an idea of who you may be lol Thanks I appreciate you taking the time and reading!! ;)

smiles

bella


writer20 5 years ago

This a great wonderful poem, thank you bella puppet.upup


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Writer, Thank you :)


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Your heart is always open and your words explain it all. I hope you are happy Bella and are enjoying true love.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Ace, I still have not found love and struggle. I have made a choice to re enter my spiritual domain and stay rooted from here on out. I have come to find that I am not fully healed from my past life and am still learning to let it go but until that happens I will find inner peace and then I will meet my prince charming for I am not emotionally ready for him. I know it now. Thanks for your kind words they are very filling to the ear and places huge grins on my face.

smiles always

bella


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

This reminds me of when I was depressed...but it seems more like a birth or rebirth. Wonderful!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Oh that darn depression Car. I hate it sometimes but honestly thats when I do my best work why is that?? Happy Friday!!

bella


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firechik211 5 years ago

Very well written.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Firechick, Thank you was dealing with a whole lot so this helped me through my day.

bella


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Bella, the great title drew me in and the poem did not disappoint. The picture is a bit creepy but it fits with the title and was part of the draw. Another wonderful piece from you. Voted up and awesome.


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

deep and sensitive thought provoking poem.keep it up


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Poetic, My apologies for the creepiness. lol thank you for the very wonderful comment you left it always is nice to read the thoughts behind other great writers/poets.

Asma, Thank you again for your wonderful comment. It places smile of joy!!

bella


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

No need to apologize, bella. I simply meant it was effective in drawing me in to read the poem.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

hmm interesting...going over to the darkside a bit there at the end maybe?


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

sUNSHINE i HAVE DEARLY MISSED YOU OH SO VERY MUCH!!! WELL MORE LIKE IN THE DARK HEADING FOR THE LIGHT LOL

SMILES :)


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epigramman 5 years ago

....well you are truly one of the very few writers here at the Hub whom I put into the third category:

1. there are a lot of good writers here

2. there are a few really great ones

3. and there are people (creative anomalies) like you who fit into a unique category of their own by creating their own very unique language ...

lake erie time ontario canada 2:54pm always a pleasure to arrive here and be caressed by your words and I really 'dig' your profile picture - if they didn't invent 'sex appeal' yet then you beaten them to it!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Epi, I have no words for you but just thank you. Nothing can describe the way your words reach my heart.

bella

P.S. Thanks for the compliment on my profile pic.

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