My Bravest Mask

Stripped of all disguise

as i see my own reflection

the image of you in my eyes

your memory enshrined in my heart

your scent engraved in my senses

i feel betrayed by my own veil,

my bravest mask of deception

the moan in silent cries

the pain of dying laughter

the sorrow in my waning smile

now i dont want to stare still

and watch fate my own grave till

and i dont want to look away

to banish the doubt and fear

if only in my thoughts, please stay..

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No_Clue 5 years ago

I felt this! Great write, pic is perfect!

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Very great piece of art here H.

voted Up and awesome...


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Mistress of Spice 5 years ago from uk uae

oh lovely, i like this status...we all do wear a mask sometimes inour lives...well done...gr8t hub...enjoy

Mistress of spice..


ps stop by and read some of my hub topic...lemme know how u feell..

tc chatmore...

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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

yea, i like the pic too. =)

thank you so much no_clue and bella!!

@mistress of spice: yea we all live behind a facade it seems.

i will definitely go through your hubs. thanks

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misslee 5 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

I read this over and over again to myself outloud, I simply have no criticism, it feels like perfection to me, I anxiously await your next peice...

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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

@ mislee.. i am absolutely speechless !!

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