My Desert Rose


She is the apple of her father’s eyes


Pale, yet she shows sign of


A blooming desert rose



Young and innocent,


Each year her beauty unfold slowly


Her natural skin glows like ancient beams



Her piercing eyes of a goddess


No ordinary man could resist those luring stare


Her soft spoken voice,


Her pouty mahogany lip


She looks more than her years


Point nipple, her soft hair,


Long slender arms


Slender fingers and a glass shape figure,


Her catwalk steps;


Debut into a view so rarely seen


Old Men and a young boy’s dreams


Was capture by the spell of her beauty?



A goddess amongst the fair ladies


The world await, she is a Queen


Hello banana lady, with de lovely brown eyes,


I hear the wind whisper your soft sweet sighs.


Your lips such a treasure of strawberry sweet,


The kiss there upon be some lucky man's treat


The world awaits, she is a queen






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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

so far the best hub I read today and I read so many ..this one just stood way out! Awesome


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Like Frank said above, you have written a beautiful poem about the pretty lady above. Voted up and beautiful.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank you Frank amd writer 20 for stopping by and commenting, and yes she is natural beauty,

one love annie


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

her beauty is beyond doubt extraordinary, as magnificent as this poem...hello darkand lovely...great to see you write poem, i've been missing it...


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

I would love to write more, however, they have my earning on hold, so to me it useless working so hard

and not getting my money worth.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

She ia as beautiful as your poem is.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank you RoseMay50 it been a long time you pop in

so good to see you..


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Levertis Steele 4 years ago from Southern Clime

The lady is as beautiful as the flowering plants. Are they really dessert roses? I have never seen them. What a crafty poem! Thanks for sharing.


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

I am so thankful to all of you who made a comment on this piece


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Darknlovely3436 2 years ago from NewYork Author

She's an African Queen

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