Dream Lover Poem

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When you dream, know that it is I

who wakes you, and takes you...

to our secret place


There amist stars, soft breezes and silence

we kiss, as the dew glistens the petals

as the moonlight contours our love


We weave a tapestry of bliss

with heart-string thread...

and blend in a heaven of sighs and eyes


Moving to the music of our souls

we merge as one pure light...

yet another bright star in the silence of night


These reflected moments

become the scattered stepping stones

flung out across the stream of loves' eternal longing...


Copyright © Helen Lewis 2009

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sherrylou57 6 years ago from Riverside

Beautiful, thank you!


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Sherrylou57 - you are welcome! Thank you for your kind comment.


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

thank you for this beautiful poem :D hugs :D


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Sa'ge, thank you for your lovely comment!


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singlmomat52 6 years ago

Very eloquently said. Beautiful poem!

Thank you for sharing!


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi singlmomat52 thanks again for your kind words - I really appreciate your kind comments on my hubs!


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi singlmomat52 thanks again for your kind words - I really appreciate your kind comments on my hubs!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

You blend so beautifully!


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Thanks again Micky for stopping by and commenting!


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sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

Hi Helen: so deep is your love, like a pool,coolness in rocky chasms, and so ethereal, orbiting with heavenly bodies.


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hisligobay thank you for stopping by and for your beautiful comments. "orbiting with heavenly bodies." Lovely~!


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debbiesdailyviews 6 years ago

Hi bright for you. ( I hope your name refers to your eyes shining bright for your children, as thats how I see you live for. )

You deseve all the lovely comments you recive.

Your poetry is beautiful. You are so gifted.

I love to keep popping back to read, and I am never dissapointed.


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Oh Gosh debbie, your comments are so very kind and lovely - yes, I do love my children; deeply. Thank you again and I am so glad my words don't disapoint!


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kennynext 6 years ago from Everywhere

Thank you. This is very beautiful.


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

You're welcome Kennynext, thanks for your kind comment!


amorea13 6 years ago

Brightforyou what a fabulous poem with the last two lines especially brilliant in image and feeling - loved it - thank you. Voted up.


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi amorea13, thanks again for such generous comments. I am honored.


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dianeaugust 6 years ago from Tennessee

brightfoyou--what a lovely way you have with words--this poem takes the reader on this romantic soiree for two. The ending is such a wonderful image--stepping stones flung across the stream of love's eternal longing--brilliant image. What a joy to read! DA


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi dianeaugust, thank you again for taking the time to read my hubs and for making this lovely comment - so glad you enjoyed it, Helen


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

very sweet and tender piece, I danced :D hugs :D


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi Sage, thank you for your kind comment and for dancing! Hugs, Helen


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

This is truly beautiful, you are so clearly in love. Magical words, I am so pleased I found your poetry. Thank you.


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida Author

Hi acaetnna, thank you for your kind comments. It's all in my imagination... (wish it was real)! That's the great thing about writing, we can conjure up the world we wish we lived in!! But yes, I have been in love - very much in love... as they say, "its better to have loved and lost...than never to have loved at all." Nice to meet yo and I look forward to reading your hubs!


justine botton 4 years ago

one is is my dream lover Eric theodoer see you day very

look it me all time way him feelig do have to me some way

see me in my soul and mind and body feel the thing about

way I go look me in my eyes very to way we me all in my

life have followed me need so want to just all way do see

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