41 "A Star Fell"- (a poem)

Short and sweet.


A Star Fell

One evening I was down by the sea,

When I saw something and was going to flee.

A star from the heavens fell and gave me a start,

It fell to earth and landed in my heart.

A bright fallen star is what you are,

Where you landed was not too far.

You descended from the sky so blue,

I picked you up, and then I fell for you.

Your shining was with a love so very bright,

I fell in love with you on that very night.

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Alastar Packer 5 years ago from North Carolina

A love from the heavens; could anything be more divine.


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gregas 5 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Alastar, than you for the comment. Actually, no there is nothing more divine than the love I receive from that star. Greg


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LaughingRain 5 years ago from Arizona

you have the sweetest poetry I've ever seen..


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gregas 5 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi LR, thank you for the comment and compliment. I have someone that is a great inspiration for everything I do, especially when dealing with the heart. Greg


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Charlu 5 years ago from Florida

What a wonderful poem and so sweet.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Super poem. Could already see that star. Reading your poem actually made me sigh, so beautiful.


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gregas 5 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Charlu, thank you for the comment. Greg


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gregas 5 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Gypsy, It's a beautiful star and not only on the surface. Thank you for the comment. Greg


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful poem. Thanks for writing and share with us. You are very talented. I am glad to know this from you. Have a good day! Cheers....

Prasetio


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gregas 5 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Prasetio, Again, thank you for the kind comment. I hope you read and enjoy more hubs. Greg


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Great poem

I have a previous good friend

his name is Greg, too

Now i have two good friends named Greg

but I am only following you


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Precious discription of falling in love. - Reminds me of a song

"Find a falling star and put it in your pocket - save it for a rainy day." (I hope I remember it correctly)

Love in your heart doesn't allow room for pain and hate.

Here's to your inspiration.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Sweethearts, Thank you for the visit and comment. It sounded correct to me. And she is absolutely my inspiration. Greg


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mrshadyside1 4 years ago from Georgia

You know,even the simple things can be profound when they come from the soul.I need to tell my wife how special she is,thanks for the reminder.Voted up.


stessily 4 years ago

gregas, So, so beautiful, sparkling with love. Catching a falling star is definitely rewarding. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt tribute.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Gregas, this was simply beautiful.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Shady, Thank you. I guess when we are married we tend to let the thoughts slip a little. I know that they appreciate it once in a while. That goes both ways too. Thank you for the vote too. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Stessily, Thank you. I can say that this falling star has brightened my path. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Jo, Thank you for the comment and inspiration. Greg


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LadyFiddler 4 years ago from Somewhere in the West

Awesome poetry :) i love your style. See me round more often.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Lady, Thank you very much. I hope to see you around a lot. Greg


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Breathtaking poem, love your style, it flows from the heart, amazing!


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi BMax, Thank you. The lady just gives me great inspiration. Greg


magic69 4 years ago

Like your poem very nice words


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Magic, Thank you for the visit and comment and I am glad you enjoyed. Greg

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