Poem- A Date Wasted

A Date Wasted

This is actually the first Poem I ever wrote. It was an English assignment that I had to write in high school and then present in front of the class. Everyone loved this poem and encouraged me to write more. (Funny story that goes with that actually, you should ask me more about it) After that day, I think I wrote like 6 other poems within the same week. Ever since then, I've been writing poems every now and then. I hope you enjoy it!

A Date Wasted, Destiny One Day, Tasted


The Gate Of Fate

I See No Where

What I Do

Is What I Care

No Destiny Before Me

No Place To Go

This Great Life I Have

Is All A Show

I Wanted Your Love

I Couldn't Get It

You Don't Even Know Me

So Just Forget It

My Time, You've Wasted

I Cannot Regain

You Words, So Hated

They've Caused Me Pain

I Won't Care Any Further

You Were Only A Chore

A Mistake In My Life

So We Are No More

Don't Talk To Me

I Have Nothing T Say

What We Had Has Faded

I'll See You Later Someday

I Got My Life To Live

I Got My Own Way

I'll Show You All Up

With My Destiny, One Day

Fate Gone

Date Gone

Live On....

© 2009 Johnathan David

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Jewels 6 years ago from Australia

I like this. Hope you do show everyone. Live on.

Ruby Hamilton 6 years ago

What a great poem , love to read more

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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia

Awsome Poem!

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Johnathan David 6 years ago Author

Jewels: Thanks for the encouragement.

Ruby: There will definitely be more. Thanks.

stricktlydating: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

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rexy 6 years ago

Nice. poem...l started my first poem in School...after 10 years or so...l entered that same poem to be semi finalist in a competition....after that ...no stopping....My poems lend up in various book and anthologies ....So l hope and wish you the best into Poetry writting.....keep up the good work.....

I am into Cyber poems...

Hope you have time to read them on my hub..

Pachuca213 6 years ago

I really liked this one as well...you have a great amount of poetic talent in you!

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Johnathan David 6 years ago Author

Wow. Thank You Very Much Pachuca213!

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ABetha 6 years ago from USA


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Johnathan David 6 years ago Author

Thank You ABetha!!! =)

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bulletproofchris 6 years ago from hutchinson, ks

good hub...u are good with rhyme which not everyone can do, even good writers. keep on writing and if i may suggest that u take a leap and publish more poetry here. i just started letting people read my writing this year even though i've been writing secretly for many years. this site is so friendly and uplifting, it really made me come out of my shell and not be afraid to show my work...hope it does the same for you

Miranda 4 years ago

I love this poem. Please write more:)

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Johnathan David 4 years ago Author

@bulletproofchris It's my hope to do that but my time with school has been restricting my ability to do so. Hopefully, I can find time to write more soon...

@Miranda Thanks! And Of course I will. :)

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