My Floating Rose (A Poem)

My floating rose

Has flown away

Into the sky

The other day

What can I do

What can I say

My floating rose

Is gone to stay

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Shruti Autism 18 months ago from Kolkata, West Bengal, India

Beautiful! So touching.


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Kevin Goodwin 18 months ago

Very touching.


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psikotik1 18 months ago from Houston, Texas

Nice rhyming.


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Jodah 18 months ago from Queensland Australia

Love this Terry, very silly but great catchy rhyme.


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Wrath Warbone 18 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

Thanks all you great ones for your comments. It is very encouraging and really what I write for. Best to all of you.


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manatita44 17 months ago from london

She will come back Bro, indeed She has never left. Great Poetry!


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Wrath Warbone 17 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio Author

Thanks for the encouraging words, manaita44. Deep thought.

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