My Fragile Heart´s In Your Hands.

Have you ever been deceived by a potential lover?

  • Yes, and as a result lost my self confidence and trust in people.
  • I'm never deceived I'm the deceiver.
  • Im to careful to allow such a situation.
  • No I'm fortunate not to have experienced such a thing.
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Loving you was it the right thing to do,

I see now how I wasted my time,

Could it be all those things you said was true,

Fantasies you had that you were mine.

Happiness is entwined with so much trust,

Emotions just seem to get in the way,

Tears of hope eventually turn into rust,

While with my heart you spitefully play.

You came into my life on a whisper and a prayer,

Gave me reasons to hold onto the dream,

Your thoughts filled my head when you wasn't there,

Your eye's shone with beauty at the things you had seen.

I thought I'd found the true love of my life,

What sweet mysteries were set to unfold,

But your words cut my heart like a knife,

That steely look in your eye made my blood run cold.

But you became someone else when I averted my gaze,

It must have happened then while my guard was dropped,

You laughed hysterically revealing my heart was played,

That's when my world no longer by you was rocked.

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Mark Psychedlic 3 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Thank you for sharing.


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toys-everywhere 3 years ago from That little rambunctious spot in the back of your mind :)

I took part in the poll as well, though it was a difficult choice because, of both the first two options I've had my experiences.


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Mark Psychedlic 3 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Thank you rose, indeed time is a great healer, also it's a great teacher, alas I'm a work in progress.

Regards, Mark.


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

Hi Mark, actually I did vote. I have known people that went through this type of situation and it was pretty difficult but time heals all wounds and it many ways it made them stronger people. Take care! -Rose


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Mark Psychedlic 3 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Thank you I hope you I hope you took part in the poll, I'm tryin to see how many people have been affected by similar circumstances.


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

Wow........what an awesome poem and yet so sad! Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose

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