My Gift To You - A Poem

my gift to you

shared promises of pleasures

like holding hands

alongside walking

hearing staccato wings

on the water

gathering speed

taking us to the sunset

from a bench on the lock

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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

short and sweet. and the images are evocative of the poem's thoughts. thanks for sharing, Russ :D


nazishnasim 7 years ago

Cris,

Ain't I a devoted stalker :p.

Russ,

Nothing compares to a sententious, effective poem. Awesome poem! :)


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Russ Baleson 7 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom Author

Thank you for your support guys, much appreciated.

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