My Land of Dreams

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I've been called a dreamer,

its occurred a time or two…

I love to visit the land of dreams!

I just adore the view!

It is a place where I am Queen

And I can call the shots…

A place of happy endings

Where I create and weave the plots!

It is a realm where rainbows live

And flowers never die…

Where every oyster has a pearl…

And like a bird I fly…

Yes, I've been called a dreamer,

its occurred a time or two…

I love to visit the land of dreams,

And if you’re polite, I’ll invite you!

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Reynold Jay 5 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

I enjoyed this immensely. Very beautiful... up one and useful. THis is the style of poetry I enjoy. SOmethaing that could be sung. Two poems similar in style to this on my HUB site. RJ


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thanks, Reynold Jay! I shall skip on over to your hub and check you out, Sir!


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Reynold Jay 5 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

I'm going to put up a poem called the Sweet Apple Ballad and you'll see the similarity in the way we write.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

RJ, I can't wait!


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Reynold Jay 5 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

It's now posted. Thanks for the interest. I'm going to hunt up another song in the next day or so that has a relgious theme called "From Mother with Love."


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Reynold Jay 5 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

You have a beautful music lyric here! The melody is a cinch. What you have amounts to two fabulous verses, now you need a chorus to bring it all together. Most verses in any song seldom come close to what you have here. Wind Beneath my Wings is the only thing that comes to mind in being as praise worthy as this. IF an eleven were to be awarded , this is it. I'm interested in using this in one of my novels. And I have't even looked at your other 25 HUBS! That's going to change. Make recommendations as to which have the most merit, please. RJ


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

I soooo love your poems. I can't stop smiling.

I too have been called a dreamer, but I wonder, isn't it where answers come from.

I hope you invite me to where you are Queen and we can all fly together, my friend.

Oh, and just so you know, I'm still smiling ...

Will


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Ahh Will! I am 'pickled-tink"! You have an open invitation, my friend! I am smiling too!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

OK then. We have a date in the clouds...


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

You're on!


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

I want to visit the land of dreams with you!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Nikki, please feel free to hop aboard the dream trolley, here!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

That's the funny thing of the land of dreamers, it's always big enough for more - remember, it's the land of no limits and infinite solutions ... not to mention unqualified love!!


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Well please do invite me. As a diehard dreamer, I have many qualms with the real world and all of the nonsense that goes along with it. Nice poem. Cheers.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

bbnix, you are so very right! I like that...no limits, infinite solutions and unqualified love!

Mr. Turner, you are hereby invited. I share those qualms, my friend...Thank you for your visit and comment! Cheers to you, as well!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Thank you for the invite. I've been accused too of being a dreamer to which I now consider a compliment! You touched my soul and I feel inspired!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

ohhh fossillady, i dont care what they say! Call me a dreamer any day! Go forth, inspired one, and write us of your magic! hugs!


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Moment in Time 5 years ago

Awesome! Love being a dreamer!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Moment, I cant dream of being a Non_dreamer!!! lol Thanks!


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HartMurengu 5 years ago from Nairobi

Beautiful, I love being a dreamer too, it keeps me going.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Hart, thank you! Yes it surely helps!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Diggin it. You're definitely a rhyming queen, in your dreams, it seems. ;] haha

very nice


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Many thank yous, Benswritings! I so appreciate your read and great comment!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

If they say you're a dreamer than you know you're okay! Dreaming makes things happen. I love the way this flows right on through. Put me on your list of invitees. Voted up.


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No_Clue 4 years ago Author

tillsontitan, thank you. You have a standing invitation!


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

Beautiful

Kay


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No_Clue 4 years ago Author

KDee, thank you, kindly! I appreciate your visit and great comment!

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