My Magick

...Me, Myself, and Maybe You

My Magick...

My nest is
Marginal at best
Tested within inches
Of that which distanced
Me from the most original sins

See it is all mine

My brain is
Drained for a day
Remains on hit parade
Shifting and sifting away
Everyone left handed outsiders

But it is not mine

My smoke is
A rainy day woman
Asleep and still dazed
Confusion settles inwards
Spinning stars granting wishes

For it is now time

My world is
An incoming slow coma
Altered but not so alone
Shaking, sparkling, shining
Like spears drifting into soft snow...

Comments 9 comments

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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

I'll be a while figuring this one out...I think it is about the facade of your life how you appear versus how you really are but I could be way off! Nice work! WB


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bibi16 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

Object in the mirror maybe closer than they appear. You are not far off, yet are not very near. If you are right, keep it under your hat...I need all the facade time I can get, and hopefully it is cheap, cause I am running low on coupons. Thank WB. BB16


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epigramman 6 years ago

...I am envious of your enigma - you have so much verve and nerve and bravery and boldness .... and it's your delicious wordplay full of intellectual prowess, mischief and playful provocation!


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bibi16 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

I am blushing, Thank you. BB16


ralwus 6 years ago

My smoke is

A rainy day woman

Asleep and still dazed

great line that. hmmm, might take me awhile to know you, but something in your prose is pulling at me. Charlie


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Well done


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bibi16 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

Abracadabra! BB16


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dmop 4 years ago from Cambridge City, IN

I like this poem, good job.


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bibi16 4 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

Shape of a ink and quill. Form of a frequent hubber. LOL !!!

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