My Trip to Heaven

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HEAVEN

I saw heaven when I was down,

no one came, no one was around.

It was a beautiful sight to see, except it was only me.

I called out a few names and no one answered.

The minute I sat down,

I caught a glance of the special man,

In a deep tone he whispered,

My child you must not stay here,

It's time for you to go..

This home is a permanent home,

and your duty was not condoned.

So go back and finish what you started,

and report to me after you would have departed,

this world u live in may not be perfect,

but I tell you now, I will fix it.

So keep your faith in me

And remember you are my child and see,

That the world has so much to offer,

It's not your time,

So get off your behind and enjoy it,

Before I come back to claim it!

Written by JLono

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Richlove 6 years ago from Denver,CO

Wow that hit home. I really like this one! =D


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii Author

Wow... that's sweet. I'm happy you like my hubs =-)


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epigramman 6 years ago

My trip to heaven: I'm there now .... I'm at your hubs!!

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